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A Dangerous New Level Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/23/07

sister and brother

wwwwwwwwwwwwhhhhhaaaaoouuuuuuu!!!!!

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by Mr Wild willy07/02/07

Great Story!!

I would have voted a ten if I could. Good, plausible story line, enough good sex, a little romance to keep it interesting. I hope you continue to follow them through College and into adult life together.

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by Anonymous12/09/08

fuck that was perfect.

I want that. I want that - that was amazing and I can't get this story off my mind. Perfect. 100%. A+. I could not have asked for a better story. I love intoxicating tales...hehe keep writing, you've got so much further potential.

p.s. in case you're curious, I'm a girl, and an only child. -sulks-

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by gmurray5110/15/13

WOW

So far, I am intoxicated by your story.

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by CaressMeDown9406/18/14

Damn!

What a steamy story!! I love it. I tried writing a story of my own, and it was pretty decent but yours is just , wow ! good job.

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by Lean6907/15/15

Keep Consistency Dear

The colour of her eyes changed from "blue" in the original story to "green" in this chaptor!

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by Anonymous11/25/16

why the tense change?

First person, both first persons, and now this?
Cost a point, just a 3, here.

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