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Death on the Rhine Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/23/07

Excellent

Loved an Australian 'animal' being there 'for the kill'. Good follow on and a hot character emerging in Folsom.

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by SadieRose01/24/07

Warming up nicely

I've only marked this down cos I don't think it's as sharp as some of your short stories, but it's still very readable.

I liked this line much:
"Folsom found straps at the side and the head of the bed to hang onto in seas that were only rough in his cabin."

Will read on...

xx. Sadie

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