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Tiptoes and Two Lips

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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz01/19/07

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Looks like someone's having fun here.

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by Amyfriend01/19/07

A bird...

in the hand is worth two in the bush.

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by Anonymous01/19/07

Sweet

happiness ~ depends on whose bush we're talking about.

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by Maria239401/20/07

great!!

loved it! each verse made me smile. And there was no need for the pseudo-apology at the end, you done good!!!

:)

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by KOLKORE01/20/07

step forward !

You had enough here even in the first two stanzas. They could stand alone as two Haiku like poems.
Charming with the combination of passion yearning and volunarability. I second Mary's sentiment on your prowess. No need for apologies.

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