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boring as hell
and dumber than hell too, i'll remember not to read any more of your stories
Outstanding.
The girl, Sandra, seems confused as to what she truly wants. The absence of control is also the absence from struggle and strife. When you're life is not your own, what of it can trouble you? Still, she seems to have a fierce drive to be the master of her decisions. Is it that she has had to grow to accommodate her responsibility for making critical decisions? While the stress, which comes from it imbues a desire to be controlled and lose both the responsibilities and the emotional anguish. Odd, though I appreciate the mythic Norse vibe, obviously you read a lot of fantasy.
Keep at it, your creativity and rhythm are excellent. Also, it is immensely erotic, still I rated it 75 for it's lack of explicit sexuality.
-Anansi
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