by opels
This is an excellent story Opels! I Love all of your works.. Keep writing! Is there more? What Happens Next?
I wish my birthday had gone as well as Steve's!! Please let us know how the rest of the say went.
Since my name is Steve,
This story is pretty much how the best birthday I could imagine might work out. Well done!
That was a great scene; you write extremely well. I notice your submissions stopped in '07...if you still monitor your stories, here's a vote for you to write more, of anything; but especially this story!