BDSM, is not my normal cup of tea, But,I promised you I would read it and for people who like this type of story, it was very well written, hence the 5 vote.
I always try to be honest in my comments
DG Hear
by
01/29/07
naughty switches
What a nice surprise! There should be more BDSM for Valentine's day.
TE you write so well. I liked as a previous reader has noted the mix of romance juxtapositioned with the administration of pain. It did not matter whether they were the same sex or opposite, it worked so well. You have a great style that I am beginning to appreciate as I read more and more of your stories.
Peter Grimm
English
Good story
Very well written and hot! I enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the contest!
Good one
I liked the element of love in BDSM. Good luck in the contest.
nice story
a nice blend of love,submission and pain. It was sweet and without excess. Keep writing. This was enjoyable
Good writing
BDSM, is not my normal cup of tea, But,I promised you I would read it and for people who like this type of story, it was very well written, hence the 5 vote.
I always try to be honest in my comments
DG Hear
naughty switches
What a nice surprise! There should be more BDSM for Valentine's day.
Good luck in the contest!
Maharat
Turnabout is fair play . . .
Loved it. All the details of what Janie was thinking . . . perfect. And I liked the little twist at the end, showing equality and love. Well done.
A spanking good time
Well done, TE. :)
Very cool...
A very good story of firsts!
Nice story!
I read and enjoyed your Valentine's Day story. I liked the romance between the characters which led into the more intense things later on. Good job.
Good story
Good luck in the contest!
DG
Very Nice
May I wish you good luck in the contest, Mistress? ;-)
what a story - love, romance, pain...mmmmmm
TE you write so well. I liked as a previous reader has noted the mix of romance juxtapositioned with the administration of pain. It did not matter whether they were the same sex or opposite, it worked so well. You have a great style that I am beginning to appreciate as I read more and more of your stories.
Peter Grimm
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