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Short but sweet
Loved the story - restrained and believable, even if it was over too soon.
it was great
but way too short.
the story was great
I thought the story was well written.
excellent start!
Readable, understandable & real, the story's the thing. No distractions, a great first story. I'll be looking for your next submission.
I particularly liked the switch from persuer to persued & the exhibitionism of the pictures & the sensuality of Anette's walk away & undressing, was very erotic.
You're an excellent writer.
WOW!!!
That's a great start, I hope you have more to add to this one..
Paul
Great start
What a first story! Loved the tentavive contacts and slow build-up. Hope there's going to be some more.
Well done
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