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Jasmine's Whip

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by Anonymous

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by mjl201001/25/07

What the heck

Just happened to me. I don't get much from women on women stories but that one got me going. Nicely written and well done! Hey! I'm the first comment. Cool!

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by Rad'l01/29/07

Very interesting

story with a very delicious plot. I think I noticed one typo and I did wonder about the use of a, new to me, past tense. Oh yeah, it was 'kneeled' - I thought the past tense was 'knelt'. Little thing - but a bit off-putting. Good story though - and thanks.

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