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by drksideofthemoon01/20/07

The Little Things in Life

Are often the best. As it is with your 50 word wonders. I anxiously await each new contest to read your newest compilation of theses shortest of the shorts.

It takes a bit of skill to write them, I have tried.

So, hats off to you, Og. Well done as always...

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by Selena_Kitt01/20/07

Yes!

What a fun one! Ring Price was my favorite. I love the twists (every pun intended) in these. Great job, as always, Og. :)

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Something a bit different.

Creative, inventive, provocative, and good.

Great job.

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by TE99901/20/07

Succinct and Sexy

Good work o' master of the 50 words. Terse and to the point as usual. Good luck in the contest.

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by Belegon01/21/07

Very Fun, Ogg...

I especially liked the simple end to Costume Drama. Very challenging and I hope as rewarding for you as it was for us.

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by rachlou01/21/07

As always ~

very witty, sharp and succinct. Well done Og!

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by CeriseNoire01/21/07

Poetic

This had such a poetic quality to it in the sound and rhythm of the words you chose. And I just love finding engagement rings under "fetish".

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by 01/21/07

I was looking forward to it

So evocative and humorous and witty.

Thank you for posting it,

Maharat

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by minsue01/21/07

hmmm...what happened to the theme?

I loved these, Ogg. They were as brilliant as I've come to expect from your 50 word stories. I didn't get the relevance for Valentine's Day, though, except for the last one.

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by Anonymous01/21/07

Enjoyable but...

A lovely group, but I fail to see the connection to the contest theme, other than the last entry. Kind of makes it look like an afterthought.

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by damppanties01/22/07

...

I realise how it must be getting harder and harder with every contest... the writing of these shorts, that is. Still, a wonder that you continue doing it. :)

Good luck in the contest, Og.

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by DG Hear01/27/07

Interesting writing Ogg

Is it 50 words in the story? What constitutes a word? Do they have to be a combination of at least 50 words of any amont of letters? Or, like an old typing test where it was five strokes to make a word. To me it was interesting writing. I don't thing I could do it. I don't think I want to try. Sorry if my 100 takes you out of the low score running.
Kudo's to you
DG Hear

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by SlickTony02/03/07

As Fun as it Ever Was

#11 was my favorite. Sex & Dr. Seuss, can't lose.

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by scriptordelecto02/05/07

Brilliant as ever!

You never disappoint me Og. I know I say this every time, but you have a real gift for saying a lot in the simplest terms.

Script

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by Munachi02/11/07

yay!

great little stories, as always!

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by mostlyintact02/07/12

Fun to read!

I like that the stories existed as unique entities while still having a sense of flow between them.

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