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The St. Valentine's Massacre Fiasco

byJenny_Jackson©
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by DG Hear01/20/07

Jeenny J. Very Good

Loved the tongue and cheek story. I like to smile once in awhile while reading a story. A Job well done Jenny.
High Regards.
DG Hear

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by capricious_chic01/20/07

Fun

What a really fun read. Great job and good luck.

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by sirhugs01/20/07

New story Review

this story has been selected for the New Story Reviews on the Author's Hangout of the Lit Forums.

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by Harddaysknight01/20/07

You have a way with humor, Ms. Jackson.

With humor and intelligence and any other attributes you may have, you should do well in any endeavor!

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as you know

all men think with their little head, but this story takes things to a whole new level. A talking dick! Very, very funny!

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by Darkniciad01/21/07

*laugh*

Yet another winner in the saga of Harry Dick.

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by l8bloom01/21/07

what a tickle!

Fun! A terrific light-hearted read in the midst of the (often humorless) steamy jungle. Thanks!

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by starrkers01/22/07

*snort* chuckle

I'll have to go back and find some of his other capers now. No hearts and flowers, but you did get the violins in!

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by rachlou01/24/07

Good 'ol Harry!

It's impossible to dislike Harry Dick - even if he is a total dick! One day he WILL get laid... lol
Well done Jenny - another funny adventure for our hapless hero!

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by duddle14601/24/07

Hilariously funny.

Hell~ I loved this right from the first line, "Violet Barfly was the kind of broad you really want to get next too." I like it when my funnybone gets tickled by an expert. Especially when it's done by someone by the name of Jenny.
Funny and very enjoyable.

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by Rumple Foreskin01/25/07

Rampant Revisionist History - and funny, too.

Harry Truman, Harry Dick, and Harry's Cock, what a combination! Something tells me you have WAY too much fun writing about poor Harry and his cock. So don't stop now.

Rumple

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by Munachi01/28/07

yay!

another great chapter of harry dick, am already looking forward to the next one...

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by RogueLurker02/02/07

The trouble with Harry ...

... is that he's just too damned funny. Wonderful romp, Jenny. :D

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by kbate02/06/07

Clyde?

A little too similar to "Clyde Umney's Last Case" in the basic premise for my tastes, but overall a fun romp and hilarious story. Well written - just bad enough to be viable as a pulp detective novel - the critic said stunningly.

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