All Comments on 'What's in the Big Chocolate Box Ch. 01'

seems like it may be a sweet one. I enjoyed the story. Good luck with the contest. :) ~ Red.

And it's poorly written. Actually, its best attributes are that it’s tedious and predictable. Beyond that it has nothing to recommend it. It has the same pitiful vision as every other wimp husband “story.” In short, both the writing and the story line are pathetic. Pass this one by.

boring and disjointed

Could not read much, just too damm dumb!

is in that chocolate box? I can't wait to find out!

You got some more great mileage out of this idea... I really enjoyed it... and I'd give you extra points if I could for posting in this category for a contest :))

I hope the next part has some good old fashioned asshole eating with tongue fucking..