You have a way of telling a story so well and even sexual content is done so tastefully and thruthfully and so believable. Please don't stop. I always look for your submissions.
As usual, another great story! I really would like to read about what happened after the initial shock of mom and daughter meeting. I always look forward for your stories!
But I'm an equal opportunity guy and always felt whats good for the goose is good for the gander, but this made me laugh at the end. Only because of how both the mother and daughter described the other to this guy.
Won't hear me say this much, but I did give this a laugh
Great story, please continue with another chapter or three.
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Anonymous01/23/07
oh yeah
u need to do it dude
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Anonymous01/23/07
Great!
I burst out laughing! I can't wait to read the rest - great story!
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01/23/07
It seems to me that you are on the hook
to finish this.
I warned you: write a good story and everyone will want more. You know what my thoughts are on how it should continue!
This really was just a great story you could sit back and enjoy. Like hdk's story of today, "Don't Bother Me," it's not about dissecting the story but simply sit back and enjoy.
Wow, DG! Possibly the most entertaining to a story on LITEROTICA that I have ever read. This superb tale cries out for a continuation and I am sure that you will not let us down! Assuming the son takes after his father, as did the daughter, the beautiful Ellen appears to be the only member of this family with normal sexual appetites. Looking forward to the next chapter(s). Pete.
As I read this, I kept being reminded of people whose ages seem to be out of sync with their personalities. Be they the ‘Peter Pans’ or the ‘Old Souls’, their lives often are used to craft an interesting story.
This story was so thoroughly enjoyable that it jumped to the top of my list of favorites written by you. The ending seemed as close to perfect as could be achieved. Both this tale, and the story “Ex-Rated Wedding” by be0wulf, have endings that work so well that they left me with lasting smiles. Thank you.
As always, a wonderfully entertaining read. Well done and good luck in the contest!
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Anonymous01/27/07
Definitely write chapter two!
Great story, and a situation I can relate to entirely too well. I am a 47-year-old woman about to go through a divorce after 23 years of marriage, the last 3 "untouched" as they say, and to my sheer amazement, find myself with a 30-year-old lover who makes me feel 21 again. I am not naive enough to think this is anything but a "boytoy" fling, but I do have strong feelings for him and can hope. I will certainly enjoy the "ride" as long as it lasts after so long "out of the car." Had almost forgotten what "driving" feels like! If nothing else, he has given me confidence in myself as a sexual being again.
Anyway, you have pegged much of the age thing exactly right. Some of what this guilt-ridden woman said sounded like you were in the room with me and my lover. (Should I look for a camera?) Best of luck in the contest. I also have an entry, but with a very different theme. Normally I don't leave anonymous comments, but in this case, I think you'll understand why I cannot even use my Literotica ID. Oh, great ending, and I didn't see it coming. Thankfully I have no children to "catch" me. Ha! PLEASE write a sequel.
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Anonymous01/27/07
what
duh;how do u splain this to God if u were anyone in this story??rickprince1949
I don't usually read stories that are labeled heavy sex but I like the author so decided to give it a try. I admit I skimmed at first but when the relationship with Ellen progressed I started focusing. LOVED the ending! I actually laughed out loud and even clasped my hand over my mouth like O.o until I realized ok you're at your comp being a doofus.
Hehe GREAT story! Can anyone else say sequel?
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Anonymous02/14/07
Talk about an ending...
Awesome story, can definetely relate from being in a relationship with a man twice my age in the past... But the ending made it! Very cool!
As a 60 + guy, I loved your story. It's pretty unrealistic inasmuch as she will be on Medicare by the time he hits 35, but that's the nice thing about Literotica. You don't have to be totally realistic. I thought your unrealistic story was great. Congratulations.
60 year old George
DG, I loved it, especially the twist. I do have to agree with most of your commentors that a chapter two should be on your agenda. Thank You. Ronnie W.
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Anonymous01/01/08
Lovely Storytelling
Nicely played out - wants a sequel to sort of tie loose ends up..go for it!
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Anonymous04/02/08
Loved the ending.
Great story, I really got a kick out of the ending.
C'mon, DG, you had to name your hero Ted Baxter? I mean, I'm reading this story and all I can see is ... well, Ted Baxter from the Mary Tyler Moore show (LOL!!). Oh, and wasn't Ellen Bartlett the name of one of the doctor's wives in St. Elsewhere, or is my early-onset Alzheimers kicking in? Great stuff.
Let's see ... her husband is gay and cheated on her with a guy. Ted lied about the readiness of her car and took advantage of her emotional confusion to get in her pants. She allowed herself to get into situations where she cheated on her cheating husband.
English
Surprise, Surprise !!!!!!!
An honest and faithful individual, and still young.
Great story as always expected from you.
Be nice for a follow up to this story.
Many thanks for your writing.
A U.K. Fan.
As Always
I always read everything you write, and this is as always excellent. I would love to see a follow up. Please keep submitting.
Wow!!!
Now that I didn't expect. Great read DG
A fan always
This REQUIRES a sequel...
See title
Even Sexual Conten is done well
You have a way of telling a story so well and even sexual content is done so tastefully and thruthfully and so believable. Please don't stop. I always look for your submissions.
Great Story
A great story as usual. I hope you continue it.
Great Ending
Yes. You definitely need another chapter.
Keep up the good work.
I didn't see that coming
and I love stories that pleasantly surprize me, but then almost all DG Hear stories do!
Outstanding!
Simply outstanding. The story cries for continuation!
Cheers!
Excellent, very well written.
I loved it so much.
Great Story!
As usual, another great story! I really would like to read about what happened after the initial shock of mom and daughter meeting. I always look forward for your stories!
Age Difference
This story definately needs at least a second chapter!!
Enjoyable..
Very enjoyable. Would deffinately love to read a second chapter to this story. Keep it up!
i wish i had a boss like that
Very enjoyable. Now I am going to have to check your other stories ...
Good luck in the contest,
Maharat
You know this normally isn't my cup of tea
But I'm an equal opportunity guy and always felt whats good for the goose is good for the gander, but this made me laugh at the end. Only because of how both the mother and daughter described the other to this guy.
Won't hear me say this much, but I did give this a laugh
-Risq
Great!
DG,
I loved that twist at the end. I would seriously like to read another chapter. Make it serious or fun, either way it will be good.
Great story
Great story, please continue with another chapter or three.
oh yeah
u need to do it dude
Great!
I burst out laughing! I can't wait to read the rest - great story!
It seems to me that you are on the hook
to finish this.
I warned you: write a good story and everyone will want more. You know what my thoughts are on how it should continue!
This really was just a great story you could sit back and enjoy. Like hdk's story of today, "Don't Bother Me," it's not about dissecting the story but simply sit back and enjoy.
Good stuff.
Regards, Jack
Cries out for a continuation!!!
Wow, DG! Possibly the most entertaining to a story on LITEROTICA that I have ever read. This superb tale cries out for a continuation and I am sure that you will not let us down! Assuming the son takes after his father, as did the daughter, the beautiful Ellen appears to be the only member of this family with normal sexual appetites. Looking forward to the next chapter(s). Pete.
very nice!
we definately need a chapter two
Easily my favorite of yours
As I read this, I kept being reminded of people whose ages seem to be out of sync with their personalities. Be they the ‘Peter Pans’ or the ‘Old Souls’, their lives often are used to craft an interesting story.
This story was so thoroughly enjoyable that it jumped to the top of my list of favorites written by you. The ending seemed as close to perfect as could be achieved. Both this tale, and the story “Ex-Rated Wedding” by be0wulf, have endings that work so well that they left me with lasting smiles. Thank you.
Great story!
As always, a wonderfully entertaining read. Well done and good luck in the contest!
Definitely write chapter two!
Great story, and a situation I can relate to entirely too well. I am a 47-year-old woman about to go through a divorce after 23 years of marriage, the last 3 "untouched" as they say, and to my sheer amazement, find myself with a 30-year-old lover who makes me feel 21 again. I am not naive enough to think this is anything but a "boytoy" fling, but I do have strong feelings for him and can hope. I will certainly enjoy the "ride" as long as it lasts after so long "out of the car." Had almost forgotten what "driving" feels like! If nothing else, he has given me confidence in myself as a sexual being again.
Anyway, you have pegged much of the age thing exactly right. Some of what this guilt-ridden woman said sounded like you were in the room with me and my lover. (Should I look for a camera?) Best of luck in the contest. I also have an entry, but with a very different theme. Normally I don't leave anonymous comments, but in this case, I think you'll understand why I cannot even use my Literotica ID. Oh, great ending, and I didn't see it coming. Thankfully I have no children to "catch" me. Ha! PLEASE write a sequel.
what
duh;how do u splain this to God if u were anyone in this story??rickprince1949
Surprise!
What a nice Goldlocks story ("...and the third one was just right>")
And I loved that twist at the end. Yes, the story must go on.
HAH! Family Dysfunction at it's best!
I don't usually read stories that are labeled heavy sex but I like the author so decided to give it a try. I admit I skimmed at first but when the relationship with Ellen progressed I started focusing. LOVED the ending! I actually laughed out loud and even clasped my hand over my mouth like O.o until I realized ok you're at your comp being a doofus.
Hehe GREAT story! Can anyone else say sequel?
Talk about an ending...
Awesome story, can definetely relate from being in a relationship with a man twice my age in the past... But the ending made it! Very cool!
Fantastic
DG you rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was great and so entertaining. Nothing short of fantastic!
Oh, and I liked it too.
Thank you
PT
AWESOME!!!
I loved this story, I am 5 1/2 yrs older than my hubby...He says older women make beautiful lovers...This story was the BOMB!!!!
AWSOME!
A good story that needs annother chapter or two. I agree!
Just brilliant
Just brilliant. What more can one say?
Saw it
Pretty good story, though I saw the ending coming.
Lots of potential for a sequel...
Better than the second
This was better than the second chapter
Typical great DG story
As a 60 + guy, I loved your story. It's pretty unrealistic inasmuch as she will be on Medicare by the time he hits 35, but that's the nice thing about Literotica. You don't have to be totally realistic. I thought your unrealistic story was great. Congratulations.
60 year old George
chapter 2 please
DG I really would love to find out the conclusion to this great story.
Pat
Damn your good
DG, I loved it, especially the twist. I do have to agree with most of your commentors that a chapter two should be on your agenda. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Lovely Storytelling
Nicely played out - wants a sequel to sort of tie loose ends up..go for it!
Loved the ending.
Great story, I really got a kick out of the ending.
ted baxter???
C'mon, DG, you had to name your hero Ted Baxter? I mean, I'm reading this story and all I can see is ... well, Ted Baxter from the Mary Tyler Moore show (LOL!!). Oh, and wasn't Ellen Bartlett the name of one of the doctor's wives in St. Elsewhere, or is my early-onset Alzheimers kicking in? Great stuff.
Good story
Interesting. I liked the twist at the end. Excellent story. Now I really have to read the sequel to see what happened to these couples.
WOW
Always love your stories, but I NEVER saw that coming. Love this.
You are a good writer!
DG, whatever you decide about a followup to this story, I'll read it if I know it's there.
please
write more of this
keep this going
enjoyed it.
Wow
Ok, I don't comment much, but damn, I LOVED the ending. Off to read the sequel...
Is there an admirable character here?
Let's see ... her husband is gay and cheated on her with a guy. Ted lied about the readiness of her car and took advantage of her emotional confusion to get in her pants. She allowed herself to get into situations where she cheated on her cheating husband.
Well-written but wow!
Lots of fun
The attitude of our young friend is highly amusing and the story is a roller coaster!
you dirty bastard!
i only have one complaint you ended it to soon! lol.
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