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by Anonymous

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by capricious_chic01/22/07

Good luck!

As a trek fan it made me whimsical.

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by TE99901/22/07

Beaming up a clever story

The Trek theme was quite enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.

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by starrkers01/22/07

Logically....

this is a fun read. Good luck in the contest.

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by Darkniciad01/23/07

Loved it

Always love something outside the norm, and this fits the bill. The arena scene actually caught me off-guard, and that's always a good thing in my mind.

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by Anonymous01/23/07

Loved it!!!

Absolutely loved it. You did well by us Star Trek Fans. Thanks, good luck!!

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by drksideofthemoon01/25/07

Good Entry

Well done my comment editing friend! I am a big fan of Star Trek, and was pleasantly suprised with your entry. Good luck in the contest.

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by past_perfect01/25/07

Still like it

Well, I liked it when you first submitted it, and still do. Good luck in the contest

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by Rumple Foreskin01/26/07

Beats the WWF

Of course, there's not much hope of a re-match. The story might have been even better if it was a bit longer. Still, a well-paced, fun read. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

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by lalai01/27/07

Star Trek Fan or Not

This is an amazingly good read. (And hot too! :)) Good luck on the contest!

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by Munachi01/27/07

Great story

I don't know a lot about star trek, but I still enjoyed this story a lot...

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by RogueLurker01/30/07

:D

I quite enjoyed this story ... well paced, a good narrative "voice", and definitely an original take on the valentine's theme. Well done.

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by slyc_willie02/05/07

An original fantasy

Reading this makes me want to watch 'Enterprise.' Loved the element of exhibitionism in this as well.

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by 02/10/07

Dont watch star trek but it was no deterrent

hell hath no fury like a woman ...

Good luck in the contest!

Maharat

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by Angela_Leibach06/05/12

This is awesome. The world needs more hot Vulcan catfights.

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