by Agnol
That was a very erotic story, good build up and wonderful interaction. Please keep up this kind of work(continuing the story wouldn't be too bad either :D) and it will be appreciated.
A great quick stroke-story, somewhat plausible and very hot n sexy! Loved it, and will be looking forward to the next installment!
-Capt
A bit rushed, but not bad. Add more details to give your writing more reality.
I really enjoyed reading this story because it was so different but I couldn't accept him calling his mother a slut when she sucking his cock for the first time . I just don't think they were that comfortable in their new relationship for him to call her a slut .
Élvezetes történet, jó volt olvasni. Remélem a folytatás is legalább ilyen lessz.