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lovely
thankyou that was really lovely, will there be a second part
i do hope so.
Charming
What a lovely tale. Very eloquent. I quite enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your work. bfd7
A lovley
story. The beautiful people live to impress themselves with flash, trying one up each other and putting down and embarrassing all those who do not come up to 'their' standards.
This fine story shows clearly who will be the winner here, while the beautiful people are still trying to figure out what has happened. They will have missed their chance to know what life is really all about, their loss while Arabella and David will live life to the fullest sharing love and respect for each other and to all those whom they will meet.
Thank you for a great St. Valentine's day story.
George
What a beautiful Valentine...
...for every reader who enjoys a good spot of tender romance. Loved the authentic characters. Also enjoyed the plot; entirely plausible and well-developed. A clear contender for winning the V-Day contest.
And need I add... please write more!
Touching and compassionate
This story was a pleasure to read. The plain and lonely need love too. Good luck in the contest.
Your submission...
...has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout.
Moving story
A sweet and moving tale. Very well done. Good luck in the contest!
Good one
A sweet, real story of finding love when you least expect it. Good luck in the contest.
It ain't perfect...
but it's as close to perfect as anyone on this site has come in years. Thanks for a great heartwarming story. You done good!
Wow
Nice build up, believable, cared about the characters, little disappointed that I won't learn more about their relationship as it develops further. Well done.
Lovely tale
Superb prose, wonderful characters and while the plot isn't new, the author's handling is deft.
Excellent fiction this is. This 100's for you, starrkers, for a story well-told.
I can only say
Ditto
Very nice romance
I liked your characters being normal people - not unbelievably beautiful or handsome - finding each other. Living well is the best revenge, and hopefully David and Arabella can do some serious good living.
Very enjoyable
Nicely written with believable characters. Good luck with the contest.
Sweet
What a great sentiment for Valentine's Day. Nicely done.
Good luck!
Heartwarming.
What could I possibly say that hasn't already been said in the other PCs? Beautiful story - good luck in the contest!
A sweet tale...
Very romantic and nicely written. Well done!
charming
true love for two ordinary people-who would have thought?
Fantastic story...
sorry it had to end!
Good luck with the contest.
Spectacular
What a tale... It made me smile like i haven't for a long time. thank you for a spectacular story..
fantastic story
A wonderfully romantic tale - one that gives hope. Very nicely told ... Arabella and the story drew in from the first few lines. Well done.
Romantic!
It made me smile. Good luck with the contest.
Awwww!
This is truly lovely!
Good luck in the contest!
Yes!
Great story. Way to go, Arabella! Score one for us wallflowers!
:)
I liked it a lot. you write well and the story is moving.. Keep on writing girl.. Cheers Yoron.
good read
Thanks for a wonderful story.
Liked it...
I liked it the first time I read it. Not sure if this is a repost under a new name or what, but I have read it, or something so similar, before.
Ooppss...
Sorry my mistake. I guess this was the story I read. Didn't realize I went thru the list of your stories.
One Of the Best
Fine story--the word heartwarming is over used but that is the only word you can use to describe this story. Congratulations author.
60 year old George
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