All Comments on 'Where The Counters Meet'

by kinkidusti

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Welcome to the Poetry side of Lit's sprawling house. This shows promise but needs much trimming; its length works against it and it sounds like a dispassionate account from an uninvolved third party.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
unexpected.

Reads more like a ballad ~ yet delightful.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
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'quickie' without much passion.

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