by Lauren Hynde
the imagery here, esp the last line. Reminds me a lot of John Berryman.
Intelligent and beautifully written, seared with that white hot imagination of yours.
...with the previous opinions, the imagery is beautiful. I find I need and want to read this poem several times, there are so many lovely, miniature pictures in the whole canvas.
Tess
Works for me. The imagery is intense and the rhythm, meter or whatever has me floating out of the room.