I loved it. Reading about April sucking and fucking gave me ideas about my own nieces and cousins, struggling to temporarily escape the confines of their upbringing. It was a great story and the incest angle made it far and away better than it's non-incest counterpart. Once again, great job, nikki_2021.
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Anonymous04/14/14
Please, a second chapter!
Awesome, but needs followup with his sis-in-law in the canoe. PLEASE!
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Anonymous03/04/15
Need more chapters..
not just one more... You can take this story places.....
I hope you continue this story. It has such great potential!
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Anonymous04/07/16
Unfinished
One star! You never finished the story. There should be an icon indicating unfinished stories so they can be avoided.
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Anonymous04/07/16
the story is good
if you finish it I'll give you a 5 4 for now
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Anonymous06/30/16
Chapter 2?!
I need to read the rest! May in the canoe, the remainder of the camping trip, all of it! Please finish this one - so good!
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Anonymous07/14/16
One Star,
Great story, but it's not finished so I'm giving it one star. I agree with a previous comment, that there should be an symbol to indicate unfinished stories. I don't want to waste my time.
English
too bad...
...that family fun did not involved parents of April. Maybe you'll write part two of this story?
Hot
I loved it. Reading about April sucking and fucking gave me ideas about my own nieces and cousins, struggling to temporarily escape the confines of their upbringing. It was a great story and the incest angle made it far and away better than it's non-incest counterpart. Once again, great job, nikki_2021.
Please, a second chapter!
Awesome, but needs followup with his sis-in-law in the canoe. PLEASE!
Need more chapters..
not just one more... You can take this story places.....
I hope you continue this story. It has such great potential!
Unfinished
One star! You never finished the story. There should be an icon indicating unfinished stories so they can be avoided.
the story is good
if you finish it I'll give you a 5 4 for now
Chapter 2?!
I need to read the rest! May in the canoe, the remainder of the camping trip, all of it! Please finish this one - so good!
One Star,
Great story, but it's not finished so I'm giving it one star. I agree with a previous comment, that there should be an symbol to indicate unfinished stories. I don't want to waste my time.
What a fantasy
Great story...Loved it..hope you add some chapters
Great story
Please write more of their adventures
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