by Athena_e19
Great writing! Yes, there were a few small typos to be found, but it didn't impede the way the story was told at all. I thoroughly enjoyed this naughty tale- and a role-reversal, at that (Dad is usually the one to take advantage of such situations, not the daughter)! I should like to see a second part to this come out someday... perhaps where she tells her dad the truth and confesses a desire for a repeat performance, this time with her baby's daddy AWARE of what was going on.
best story i have ever read.god i hope you keep writing love how you keep up the details
I'm glad you wrote from the daughter's point of view. There are far too few stories written from the woman's perspective - I always find them more enjoyable.
Continue the strong work.
Loved the story, hope to see it develop into a series to continue with the story, get some closure on what happens after. Will the father learn his daughter's baby is his? What will his reaction be? Hope to see those questions addressed in any sequels you may write.
Also I'm starting up a series of Incest/Taboo stories myself. If you'd like, I'd enjoy co-writing something with you. If interested, e-mail me: survic84401@gmail.com
Very hot. Nice to see a story where the girl is the aggressor, but not the usual virgin-who-acts-like-a-porn-star aggressor.
Not gonna harp on the editing issues, but do hope you'll get them straightened out. You're a great writer, and you shouldn't let a tiny, easily fixed thing like typos detract from that.
Also, if you have the inspiration/inclination for it, a sequel would be just dandy.
This was probably one of the best stories I have read on this website. Keep it up!
I enjoyed the detail and I hope that you will write more soon! What would daddy do if he ever found out?
love this one.. just wish there was more did and keep fucking you after u found out you where prgo.... right another one love to read it
C'mon already ! We need the sequels NOW.
One of the best I've read. The descriptive buildup and the prose are exceptional.
My comment is to the anonymous user your story is disgusting and I feel sorry for your children.
Why are you in this section reading if you are not interested in such stories. Feel free to read elsewhere.
Good story. Keep them coming
My god that was........beyond perverse and I loved every delicious word of it,great work!
I personally think alcohol + horniness + family = the best time ever...I mean think about it,when your drunk and horny you tend to get kinkier than usual and ready to explore the ultimate pleasure & who would be the naughtiest person to explore it with than family ;)
That's my 2cents at least AND Thank You for this perfect story,as well as all your other incest offerings.....They are fully appreciated by me and I came countless times while reading them...... A fan.