No pun intended. It seems quirky, strange, but wow! Hooked! Once I started to read, I couldnt stop. It was the erotic thought of Fiona, used, yet willing. Great idea, and well written too. Nice to see one from the UKas well instead of the US (grammar is better!) Please - do write more!
You are a bad, bad man. This one goes right in the 'makes me want to give you a good smack' file.
5 stars for evoking visceral response! and for the exquisitely nuanced portrayal of Fiona which you accomplish without once resorting to description. It's not so much what she says, as her voice, her tone: reading this is like watching a truly gifted, trained actor create a character.
It's a quality of craftmanship that great playwrights possess. Ever considered adapting these stories for performance?
English
Surreal
No pun intended. It seems quirky, strange, but wow! Hooked! Once I started to read, I couldnt stop. It was the erotic thought of Fiona, used, yet willing. Great idea, and well written too. Nice to see one from the UKas well instead of the US (grammar is better!) Please - do write more!
Sexy Simon Says...
Very hot and sexy, nice description of how a woman feels when that's all that she wants ;)
A Total Turn-On!
I throbbed reading it. Just loved the tone and the whole idea of the unseen man. You've got the cocky (no pun intended) artist thing down as well.
More, please!
One of the best stories I read so far. Sexy und graphic at the same time. Please write some more, you're very talented!
Masterful
A really brilliant piece of writing. I could have almost been there in the room. Fantastic!
Wow
That was hot!
Amazingly skilled portraiture
You are a bad, bad man. This one goes right in the 'makes me want to give you a good smack' file.
5 stars for evoking visceral response! and for the exquisitely nuanced portrayal of Fiona which you accomplish without once resorting to description. It's not so much what she says, as her voice, her tone: reading this is like watching a truly gifted, trained actor create a character.
It's a quality of craftmanship that great playwrights possess. Ever considered adapting these stories for performance?
Just a thought.
Just why ...
there are no more stories, all your stories have been five star stories.
God, that was hot. How refreshingly unusual; filthy and beautifully written. Loved it. Thank you, A
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