Glad you are of no relation to me.I pity your poor husband,hope there are no kids.
by
Anonymous01/30/07
Love
tho9se hot sensuous women!
by
Anonymous01/30/07
Your second mistake was this 'story'
Your first mistake was writing the story in the first place.Your second mistake was writing this second part and taking up valuable publishing resources. However I am going to use this story as an example of why none of my stories should be rejected anymore for simple, I mean small simple mistakes.
If the mods allow trash like this to be published then anything goes.
On you first and second mistake is that the "story" should have gone in the NIGGER section. Not the interracial section where stories about good black people and people of color go but in the NIGGER section..Oh there isn't one? too bad
I would have liked to have had it take a little more work to get you on your knees, not anything physical just a more artful seduction. Or maybe just a little more insight into what you were thinking as you realized what was going to happen. Still this was well done and I hope you continue to keep the sexual encounter understated and erotic.
by
Anonymous01/30/07
Waiting For The Encore
Which I do hope- includes his sending her back to her husband pregnant!
by
Anonymous01/30/07
improving
better writing in this part, but the characters are still dull and lifeless. Cardboard cutout characters including nasty black man, conniving white slut wife and wimpy clueless huisband have been done to death. Try to devise a way to show us why you find the situations compelling.
English
MORE!!!
Excellent 1st part! Carry on!!!
Trash
The story, and the character writing it.
Slut,
Glad you are of no relation to me.I pity your poor husband,hope there are no kids.
Love
tho9se hot sensuous women!
Your second mistake was this 'story'
Your first mistake was writing the story in the first place.Your second mistake was writing this second part and taking up valuable publishing resources. However I am going to use this story as an example of why none of my stories should be rejected anymore for simple, I mean small simple mistakes.
If the mods allow trash like this to be published then anything goes.
On you first and second mistake is that the "story" should have gone in the NIGGER section. Not the interracial section where stories about good black people and people of color go but in the NIGGER section..Oh there isn't one? too bad
Nice second part
I would have liked to have had it take a little more work to get you on your knees, not anything physical just a more artful seduction. Or maybe just a little more insight into what you were thinking as you realized what was going to happen. Still this was well done and I hope you continue to keep the sexual encounter understated and erotic.
Waiting For The Encore
Which I do hope- includes his sending her back to her husband pregnant!
improving
better writing in this part, but the characters are still dull and lifeless. Cardboard cutout characters including nasty black man, conniving white slut wife and wimpy clueless huisband have been done to death. Try to devise a way to show us why you find the situations compelling.
Just starting to heat up. Take yor time telling h
future chapters are nastier and include public exhibition and humiliating sex.
Great
Awesome please continue.
Horrible
After about the third paragraph I gave up on this story. I gave Ch 01 and 02 both one star. I'm not going to waste my time on chapters 3 and 4.
Just as I thought another big ugly fat assed skank
Put this bulshit in IR you fat assed skank!!!
0 stars!
Hope hubby shows up and shoots the nigger first and then makes you beg to live then offs you you fat assed skank!
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