All Comments on 'Sea Breeze'

by Lauren Hynde

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Like

the imagery here, esp 'sips the sheets of sea'

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Excellent minimalist imagery leaving the reader to picture the ripples the breeze generates across the water or the teasing caresses under a summer dress. What better time to savor this than while the temp's just below -15° C.

sandspikesandspikeabout 17 years ago
You got it right

This is a great visual. "endless pages" I could turn them forever.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Ahh..

why is nature so kind with her magnificent images..

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Beautiful

Simple yet beautiful with an elegant grace.

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