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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Very picturesque imagery here, Art. Can just see flowers cast off from trees and plants floating on down the river to the ocean in the calm morning air. Just one little detail ~ set this one in permanent ink ~ it's twilight.

sandspikesandspikeabout 17 years ago
real good

I haven't read much lately so I'm glad Ang. mentioned this poem today. I can't remember any thing you've done that flows as well as this beauty. A message and visual worth reading.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Quaint

I love your picturesque style which makes me feel and see the colors and emotions in the poem- you bring life to the words.

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 17 years ago
makes me want

to get up early so I can watch the sun rise-and see the blossoms fall...

bluerainsbluerainsabout 17 years ago
u trip

the switch to my blue gliding strut...\ meld the world into glass...as picture perfect...blue

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