All Comments on 'Laundry Tales 03: Valentine Cake'

a very sweet romance! I loved it, as I loved the other two laundry tales. Thanks Og!

A very pleasant suprise!! Well done!1

from the resident ghost. Superb imagery, og. Best of luck in the contest.

enjoyed reading it...

Sweet little romantic tale, and being drawn into the stories is still just as ingenious the third time out as it was the first. Good luck in the contest

Les(Darkniciad)

A quality piece of writing. But then, that's nothing new. A longer, stand-alone, version might be even more effective. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

I loved the mess the cardboard cake made!

Good luck in the contest,

Maharat

That you can have your cake and eat it too?

Cute story. Good luck.

Thank you for the story. I particularily liked the part where the heroine was trying to get out of the cake and fell into his arms. Nice touch.

Brilliant! You are something else, Og :) Loved it!

Very enjoyable read, you really have a very unique style. Good luck in the contest.