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Unusual & fun
Unique approach - enjoyable.
Loved the playfulness
and the sense of fun and a laughter.
Unique
I like the storytelling device, and the playful nature of this one. Good job, and good luck in the contest.
Les/Darkniciad
Loved It!
Very orginal. Great ideas. Loved your writing style. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more.
Very hot!
Great buildup. Like the 12 days of christmas series someone else wrote on here, but faster. I'm confused though if these two were strangers or knew each other. I guess its not important though. Hot sex! :)
Really Hot sex--well written; great story line.
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