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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Quite a laundry list of desires! The piece would be stronger if you eliminated all but the first and last "I DESIRE".

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Desires

Detail list of what the lover of her dreams should be like.

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