All Comments on 'Beach Skiing'

by Flynn77

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Another excellent story from Flynn77

Your stories are splendid and it's a pleasure to see another added to the collection. I look forward to the next installment with great anticipation. Please don't let it be too long before you post again.

ErotonautErotonautabout 17 years ago
Lucy loosens up

A terrific start to what I hope will be a long-running series (I'd like to see more of Anna and Pascal, too). What's especially good is the way Lucy slowly lets go of her inhibitions, yet doesn't make the Damascean flip many writers might have been tempted to introduce and turn into a cock-hungry slut with every guy on the beach. A journey is more interesting when you take small steps whilst remaining unsure of the final destination.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

REALLY HOT! MADE ME SO HARD!!

PLEASE TELL US MORE!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Not bad --- Good, but.....

I liked it... descriptions were good but the story line was a little far fetched..... Not the story itself but how easy it was for the situation to develop.... it just doesn't happen that way and if it does... tell me where.

Over all though - a good story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
More, More, More

More, more, more!!! Would enjoy some more of Andy and Lucy on those beach environs, perhaps with Pascal and Anna as well, but, definitely, with Lucy loosening up some more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Ho Hum Another English pervert

I am confused. I have a number of British friends and they are all charming, likeable people. The one I know all happen to be happily married couples. Where do all the English writers on Literotica come from? They are certainly not normal people.

the Ct Yankee

ErotonautErotonautabout 17 years ago
That's why it called fiction

I fear the previous correspondent fails to grasp the difference between fantasy and reality. By this rule, the police should be digging up Bret Easton Ellis' backyard, because he wrote American Psycho.

Flynn77Flynn77about 17 years agoAuthor
Ho Hum Another Thick Ct Yankee

I wrote the story, and for that idiot's information I'm not English, although the English do happen to have a reputation as one kinky race.

I'm presuming his 'British' friends all indulge in missionary-position sexual intercourse for procreative reasons only.

Hilariously, the mouthy Yank might be startled to know, the events for the most part actually took place; Canary Islands, S.Europe, a popular hotspot for some uninhibited individuals. Allow me to open your eyes to the big bad wide world.

I've written about it in the past and have another couple of interesting holidays ('vacations' to you, dumbass) to tell of.

Of course, the names of those involved are changed - you got to watch out for Ct. Yankee's kind looking you up in the phone book. . .

Flynn.

Snow SnakeSnow Snakeabout 17 years ago
Terrific work; as always. Keep 'em coming!

Before I get to the complimentary comments addressed to Flynn77 for another dynamite story, I'm going to indulge in a short little rant.--I'm really getting sick of reading non-constructive, derogatory remarks from readers who seem suprised to find themselves reading fictional, sexually oriented material on a website called: "Literotica." They seem shocked to find descriptions of group sex in the Group Sex section, and are offened when they read about adultry in the Loving Wives section, etc., etc, etc. The bottom line is this: if you don't like the stories, DON'T READ THEM. I suggest you do a search for "Disney Online." There you'll probably find content more suited to your dispositions. Just get . . . out . . .of . . . our . . . faces!--Enough of that. Flynn77, this was yet another installment, in what is becoming a long line of outstanding erotic stories. You combine excellent characters, good story-lines, and plenty of erotic punch to keep us horny and entertained. I sincerely hope that you'll finish all of your stories-in-progress and treat us to any stories you've yet to introduce. I check your author's page for new content on a daily basis. Please ignore the jackasses and keep them coming. Thanks for your hard work!--Snow Snake

emmachemmachover 15 years ago
hot

wow flynn77, another very hot story with lucy, she just gets hornier!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
GREAT STORY; AN EXPECTATION

I was expecting Anna to lick the cum from Lucy and for Lucy to reciprocate. Was thinking that this would lead to some girl-girl kissing and other interaction. Maybe in another story . . .

norcal62norcal62over 6 years ago
A bit over written.

You don't need an adjective (or more) for every noun. Makes it cloying, gag me. I like your scene descriptions and your sense of eroticism, even if your male leads seem weak and indecisive; or sneaky and underhanded. Thanks for not using the word, gusset. Can't figure the Brit fascination with it.

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