Age Difference, The Sequel

I loved this story

This story really moved me. It was an emotional journey that I'm glad I took.

You sure can write a good story

It didn't end the way I thought it would--and that's probably a good thing. Your ending was a lot better than the way I thought it would turn out. I thoroughly enjoyed this sequel.

DG Hear i loved this story the first time it

.DG Hear i loved this story the first time it story the first time it was posted and even now please keep up the great writing .

My opinion

As far as another sequel, I think let well enough alone

A wonderful story

As far as another sequel, I also think let well enough alone

Heart breaker

I have spent quite a bit of time reading your stories. I can say I rarely read all submissions by an author unless they only have several. This story really is a heart breaker; both joy and anguish. In summation of this tale is the capacity to make one feel emotion. I definitely was all over the place with this tale. Thank you so much for posting and sharing your talent.

I hate death but you wrote it in beautifully

Ho hum what a bummer. But a semi happy ending

I liked your ending.

Another really enjoyable story. It was fairly obvious that the protagonist and Cindy would get together. I'm not sure any other sequel would really fit. You're an excellent excellent author. Thanks for sharing.

[Gualterio]

Again, a lovely story.

A great, romantic story. I had tears at the funeral and don't consider myself sentimental.

It worked out well, I like my stories to work out well. I would really have liked the first sex scent between Ted and Cindy but that's just me. I am going to read the rest of your stories.

that was great!

i enjoyed that, even with the problems it was a very sweet and loving story.

To the bad mouths

I have read every story DG has written,if I had a bad comment I sure as hell wouldn't let him know, because he might quit entertaining us with his stories. He is one he'll of a story teller.

DGH at his best

Great story. I read your recent story and clicked on your member page to check your other submissions which I missed and I found this one. Once again, I felt very satisfied that there are actual writers on this site. Otherwise, more than 70 per cent of the stories here are the kind you will just rush through it. But this was a special one. And all your other stories are. You can't rush even a single word of your stories. They just hold you to your seat like a good movie. I enjoy reading your stories and I hope you will keep on writing on this site.

You are blessed

You are truly blessed with a great talent to interweave strong emotions with a great story. While this is a strange site to see stories of love I am finding that you and several other writers have made this a site to come to, often.

Five

Couldn't quite give it a five, but it was certainly a four plus.

im a fucking sucker

for love, happy endings and sometimes payback.
you get a 5 here.

Reads Good the Second Time Around

I read this when it was first posted but came across it again today. Ending up with Cindy made a lot of sense and you could kind of see it coming, but that does not detract from the story at all. Interesting and erotic tale well told!

WOW

trully a moving storie.

feeling

if you can reaad this and not get choked up your dead.. well written and developed. damn good.

AGE IS SO ARBITRARY

except for legality....consenters should never wonder or worry. TK U MLJ LV NV

The arithmetic worked out well this way!

Five stars for the first story, and five more for the sequel--that's ten stars and that's what the tale of Ted and his adventure with older women deserve! A wonderful story from a wonderful storyteller!

Numbers... just facts.

Facts and figures can be manipulated in any number of ways to prove your own view point. Feelings are not so easy to tabulate and averaged, let alone measure. After a certain age, the differences in age are minimal if you can get past how others may view your decisions. Sometimes the obstacles of fearing how others judge us allow us to let the best things life gives us get away and lose forever. This story shows that a deep inner strength is needed to hold onto the best parts of life. Thanks for the story and allowing differing perspectives reflect through.

GREAT STORY!

Really good job. Had an idea where it was going when Cindy came in the picture, but still, very well written and well done the way you made it pan out. Thanks!

Great Story

You are a great Storyteller! Keep writing

The sequel worked for me -

Just the way it was -

A Beautiful Story And Ending

All I can say is a thank you and that real love always wins out in the end.

No Need

No need for another ending, although it was sad that Ellen had to die, having him marry Cindy was just perfect!

Happiness

A happy ending that made sense and had real closure, thank you

WOWWWW

When I made my comments to chapter 1, I didn't realize there was a chapter 2! Boy was I glad to see a chapter 2 to this story!

Was really sad to see Ellen go the way she did but I understood. Then when Cindy and Ted got together it made the perfect ending. As is usual with DG HEARS stories!

Another GREAT STORY!

DG great story

I read the first part and really enjoyed it
But the finish was what made this story great
thank you
write more feel good stories

good

not much to add to the others here, it is a good story.

Second or third time

Still as good as the first. I lost my mother to the same disease. With her though it was a month and four days from onset to burial. This story brought me to tears. I met a similar couple with almost as huge an age difference. At the age of fifty one, she gave birth to triplets. One boy and two red headed girls. They are still together after thirteen years. Makes you wonder what the young couples are doing wrong to have such high divorce rates.

Two Kleenex boxes

You are the master. What a tender and sweet story. Except for Cindy's a-hole husband, all the players are decent human beings. Richard wasn't evil, he was just a politician; is that a redundant statement?
I'm always looking for a new gem from you.

convoluted and

great story. You did good. Happy Valentines day...Scotty

good story

What can I say, it is a good story. Thanks...

what a beautiful love story

age makes no difference if you love someone....happens all the time....so glad he was able to give Ellen the true love she deserved and to get involve with the kids and be a father figure to them....sad about her death but so glad Cindy loved him just as much and now they have a complete family especially with the new baby...and what a great dad he is to the lads unlike their wimp ass real father....