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Now that was worth waiting for the follow up.
Great story and plenty of romance, with a shade of tragedy.
Once more I'm waiting for the next of your stories.
Thanks from a great fan in the U.K.
Thank You
The story now has closure and you have done a perfect job of it. Again, thank you.
Great
Your story was b-e-a-u-tiful. I almost cried during the letter.
Dear writer,
You could get a stone to weep.
January is your month
Four stories in one month for a DG HEAR fan is too much to take. Your stories read as if you were sitting right across from me and telling it yourself. Well done and Thank You
You asked for it!
I had a large number of comments requesting a sequel. I had no plans on one and wasn't sure where I would go with it. I hope you enjoy it. It does have closure.
For those writers who want a different ending, please feel free to take the story and run with it. It would be interesting to see where you go with it.
As always, thanks for reading my stories and commenting on them.
DG Hear
so - so
it was nicely written but i find the plot contrived and predictable. i find it funny that the protagonist question the husband's( who is gay) rationale in prefering to be w/ another man. um, duh!
Why fuck with a good thing
Leave it alone
FABULOUS STORY DG
loved it... I kind of where the plot was going but still well done
Age Difference, The Sequel
Absolutely Outstanding!! Your story ended the way it should.
There is no need for alternate endings. Great Job!!
Impressive
DG,
I can only agree with Hansbwl, and H2OWader, a perfect end to a perfect story. I suspected what was comming but the way you wrote it was better than I imagined. Another classic from the Master!
Perfect ending to a perfect story!!!
DG, dear friend, you ended this superb tale the way it should with the perfect ending to a perfect story. There is no need for an alternative ending and shame on anybody who attempts one! I cried over the death of Ellen but the alternative of him marrying Cindy and having Ellen as a 'live in' lover is too distasteful to contemplate. Yes, DG, the perfect ending! Great Job! Pete.
WHY?
Why try writting another ending to the one we have now? this one was just perfect. yet another wonderful story. pplease keep up the outstanding work.
AWESOME....
Is there really anything else to say??.....Just awesome..
perfect ending
great job.
Perfect Ending - even if sad
I'm glad you wrote a sequel. It rounded out the whole story and, as you said, was also a good stand-alone tale. Thank you
Another excellent read
DG, I agree with the majority - Life, with it's many twists, turns and surprises. Rarely has a happy ending. Why mess with a good story? Unlike some stories that seem preoccupied with the intricate mechanics of sex - Your stories seem to have a life of their own. Thank you for an excellent read. Keep 'em coming!
Wonderful
Thank you for that. I was anticipating a sequel, and you couldn't have written anything better. This is the perfect ending. Thank you, again.
Outstanding!
This is a true example of story telling at its best.
Many compliments to you DG.
Story Telling at its Best
That was one of the best stories I've ever read. The ending was extraordinary and it touched the heart without being too sappy. You did an outstanding job of telling the story. Thank you.
Great story, great ending
DG Hear: your writing skills have gotten progressively better; and this story, including the sequel is in most respects your best yet. This should be in the Valentine Day story entry, if it's not already, it should be shoo-in for the winner. It choked me for sure. Keep writing, looking forward to your next submissions.
can't improve on it
Liked your first part loved the sequel.I don't see anyone improving on it.
It ain't broke
You can't improve on an excellent story, even though the ending was predictable 90% of the way through.
Best ending possible.
Keep up this style of writing.
Excellent !
I had thought it would be difficult for the sequel to be better, but in this case it serpased it. Very well done!
I bow to thee....
I'm the 47-year-old woman with the 30-year-old lover who left a comment on part 1 of this lovely tail of tale. As I said previously, I also have an entry in the Valentine's Contest, but I bow to you. ("Not worthy, not worthy!") This story mad me mad, made me sad, made me cry, and made me glad again. I am VERY happy you avoided all those trite cliches that could have happened, and left Ted a faithful and honorable man to the end. I should be so lucky to find one like him. This was a very realistic depiction of all the secrecy and turmoil that goes with such a situation. Good luck and HIGH FIVE!!
I hate to say I told you so!
Well, actually I don't mind at all. You just needed a bit of a nudge.
I think you picked the right story line and did well with it.
This ending makes the first part even stronger.
Way to go!
Regards, Jack
It is the "Best"
It was a very exciting story and it kept my attention all the way through it. It was sad for Ellen to die but it made a happy sad ending but it was great.
Damn Good.
Well, I WAS going to enter, but I see it's pointless now. Judges would have to be blind not to pick this one. Damn good job!
wow
I have never commented on a story before. I honestly came on Lit like I do every so often looking for something, frankly, to beat off to. This has to be the first time I've come here with that intent and ended up almost in tears. This is a beautiful story. How much truth there is in it doesn't matter, because the feelings and emotions coneveyed by it are simply astounding. I don't really know what else to say, so...cheers!
Every slice of Pizza was a proof of their love…
It was wholesome satisfying storytelling, the kind you associate with sitting next to a fire place and actually hearing someone telling you. The pace was indeed not hurried, and you could guess in what direction this is going. But this story felt more like a true romance than anything else. How many stories, the best ones in fact, we like to read again and again. The ACTUAL surprise is overrated. If the story itself is well constructed, it will hold even if we know and even if we guess because it’s credible. Here and there I especially loved the good hearted humor, even irony over the characters. It added spice. For example: whenever they bring take out food; be it Pizza or Chinese it’s their love that makes them see a magic in the most mundane: Oh how did you know that I love Pizza? ; How did you know that I love Chinese? Etc. It was fun and touching to see their blindness out of love.
Couldn't have been better.
The ending couldn't have been better.
Wonderful!!! Moving!!! Amazingly Perfect!!!
I loved the story! I read the first one and I simply loved it. So I just had to read the sequel. And it didn't disappoint my expectations at all. I wouldn't change ANYTHING! It was wonderfully written and contained the perfect mix of an interesting, touching plot and engaging erotica. Two thumps up!
Better then the First
Better then the original. Very heartfelt-alot more focus on the plotline I felt. There was some predictability but it fit the genre of the story so poo to people who complain. The detail was wonderful and the letter was just a wonderful part. Great job.
You Know,
I should give you a zero for ruining my mascara.
superb writing
Love is love and all the rules which try to rationalize it are no true impediment once it awakens. Those who loved know.
Good luck in the contest!
Maharat
The Best
This has to be one of the best I've ever read.
Thank you
Thanks for giving us Part 2. I thought it was better than the first part. Again, thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Excellent
I enjoyed the first part and really felt the emotions of the action. The second section carried the story and me to a wonderful conclusion. Keep up the quality.
Fantastic
if you were to put this as a book i would buy it it has so many emotions in it and with a great happy ending keep up the good work my friend we want to read more
thank you.
Another great DG Romance
II am hit an miss on my days I get to read Literotica and I surely missed your wonderful ending to this story.So a real thank you for this great tear jerker.PT
Bullseye
Anonymous here again, and the ending was a little predictable. But you certainly hit the bullseye, and excellently written, despite a grammatical faux pas or two. And your attention to most detail is great.
One grammatical example was almost Freudian, regarding Richard's "sole mate." No doubt, a perfect conjoining with a "heel."
Agree with the Rest
Yes DG I agree with the other readers at first i thought Ellen was going to make Him into a toy boy but after reading the rest i thought differently Great story DG.
Pat
Great Romance
Have to admit that I really enjoyed the
first 25% and thought that it might make a
very good short,short story but then we would
not have had the last 25%. Keep up the good
work!
Great work DG
I would love to read another chapter an updated story after the kids are grown up and cindy and Teddy are Happy together
is there a chance at that DG?.
Pat Murray
Way to go
DG, A great feel-good love story. Just love happy endings. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Very very touching, good work
I love a good feel good story
Very moving piece
The way you have the story is great the lesbian piece was ok but the wedding could have been a little longer with the parenys being there helping Cindy Marie and everything ,I really laughed and cried at reading the story.
Omg
I never thought I'd almost cry at an erotic story before. To me this is a truly well rounded story. I loved every bit of it.
Great story
DG, I know you must hear this all the time, but that was a really good story. As a man of 50 years old, I couldn't believe that I was crying my eyes out more than once while reading this. You have a great style of writing. Thank you for this story... Jack in NC
magnificent
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