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What Once Was Innocent Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/21/07

Only the beginning

Hopefully there will be more to come.

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by Anonymous07/20/07

Unbelievable

If he is 40y old and he was married at 20, that would be around 1987. How could he be using the internet in the late 80s or even in the early 90s? Do a little research at least.

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by constanthardon08/01/07

Douche (response to stupidity)

(This is a response to the moronic question of how Garrett could use the internet in the mid-80's.) The internet originated in the 60's and was already widely used by 1985. Research? It's an amateur fantasy story, you idiot! Do a little more reading instead of analyzing. And do a little research yourself before you respond and come off as a dumb ass. Thanks for reading! :)

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by Anonymous03/28/09

Novella

If you want to write a book or short story, please take it elsewhere.

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by Anonymous09/13/09

On the Internet

The world wide web was invented in 1990, and before that the Internet was just a connection in between universities. Well written stuff otherwise. Who cares about detail accuracy?

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by TawndieWahengle10/16/09

Great beginning!

Hot! Licking my lips in anticipation of the next chapter...

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