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by Talynnda02/20/07

needs a lot of work.

Your premise was solid, but the grammar was appalling. I would suggest that you work with an editor to fix things like the run-on sentences that so detract from what could have been a very entertaining story!

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by Anonymous12/07/15

Very funny. Get an editor.

When a man buys lingerie for his wife, he's buying himself a present. Not a gift for her. So get that straight. But at least she has some fun with it. Next year? Jewelry. Nice jewelry.

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