All Comments on 'Hotel Room Treat'

Your premise was solid, but the grammar was appalling. I would suggest that you work with an editor to fix things like the run-on sentences that so detract from what could have been a very entertaining story!

When a man buys lingerie for his wife, he's buying himself a present. Not a gift for her. So get that straight. But at least she has some fun with it. Next year? Jewelry. Nice jewelry.

Watching paint dry on Saturday night is better than this story.