My Vietnamese Granddaughter

OUTSTANDING!.....PLEASE CONTINUE!

I was in a completely different aspect of the war.....Navy gunship going up rivers to support ground troops and Green Beret outposts(1965-66). But I have sweet memories of the young Vietnamese pussy I enjoyed on our rare Liberty opportunities.
I love your story and have no criticism, but being the consumate pussy licker, would love a more detailed description of you sucking these sweet pussies to many orgasms.
Great Work!!

I am sure I have commented before!!

Jim, I must have read this story 5 times!! I have always loved it. It has its very touching moments, and also its sexy moments. While I missed being drafted by a year, I have lived in Asia now for 27 years, but have never been to Vietnam as my focus has always been on China. A most beautiful story... and while it has been 2 years and you have moved on to many other excellent stories, I for one would love to see you dust it off and write Chapt. 2 and 3 or whatever you can manage. Thank you

Part 2

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS !!!!! PART 2 PLEASE!!!!

More from your exceptional body of work

Jim, Thanks again for another fine piece. You masterfully allow your readers to get right into the story.

Would love to read a Part 2, there really is much more material here.

We loved it

Mate, it would be great if you completed the next part of this story. I think "Jasmin" liked it even more than I did. It's the forbidden part that makes her so horny after reading it. Thanks for the good writing with few, if any, errors. A pleasure to read. Please continue.

More

Great story. Hope to maybe read a dirty uncle type story from you. ;)

Sequel is long overdue...

Read this a long time ago and after re-reading it again, still waiting for a sequel. Great story, but only half done at best.

=) smiley

im about to reread this badass piece of fiction i want a sequel if you can muster it but i understand if you for whatever reason cant but if it was left up to me you would be writing 2 additional chapters 10 pages each lol lots of time with the grannies and with the grand daughters ... hell yeah haha both intimate and not i enjoyed the hell out of this story the first time i read it was severly disappointed when i didnt find a sequel when i finished , yeah only thing that i dont like about your writing is there isnt enough of it haha

Beautifully done

When you do the sequel (PLEEEZE) I'm afraid that you'll find that another is required. This storyline could tie up an awful lot of time so I'd understand if you never get the second part written. I'll be disappointed, but I'll understand. Thanx for the effort.

I absolutly loved this, I'm surpriesed a part 2 is not up already. This story was fantastic and a cliffhanger too. As you have seen with the other comments we all want to read more about what will happen with Sam Cyn and there family. Hope to read some more of this soon =]

Another

Please write story ending...

Taking me back on a journey long ago....

you took me back on a journey I traveled long ago.... Beautiful, well done brother.... keep the faith and write sequels.... I am actually back in Nam working now and enjoying...

where is part 2

Mr. Scouries, it has been quite some time and no part 2. this is a great story and needs proper attention. lol, you should not be such a great writer. Do you have any ideas of when this story will have a long and wonderful followup? thanks larry

part two

when is part two coming out

Very nice and unique looking forward to the next part

LOL

YOU KNOW YOU HAVE TO PLACE A BOW ON THIS HOWEVER MAKE SURE HE TAGS UP THE REST OF THE CLAN AND ALLOW HIS SO TO TAG HIS BLOND HAIR DAUGHTER AND COEDS... NOW GET TO WRITING MY IMAGINATION IS WAITING

My Vietnanese Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I see that the orignal was written back in 2007, its 2012 don't you think time to submit the secondhalf. I rated this story 5 stars, wonderful to the 10th power

Part 2?????

MY goodness....you really need a part 2.....the dreams I have of a followup...PLEASE!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!

Time for the next installment

Greate story. Inquiring minds wants to know what happened next.

loved it.

great story line. good flow and decent sex. i prefer shorter asian women, but they'll do. time to write chapter 2. thank you.

Just wow!

A very emotional and gripping story. I love the transition of the main character from an old ugly perverted racist to a sad man who was deprived of the family he truly wanted, and finally regaining some of that through his granddaughter. I love stories that leave the reading guessing for him/herself what will happen next but like the other people before me, I wouldn't mind a sequel (especially the reunion with Han and Kim). I feel Asian stories (good ones at least) are hard to come by here, and I was glad I accidentally stumbled into this one :-)

second half please?

I"m intrgued to find out what happens when Joe meets Han and Kim again. Please write more.

just read it, wow! can't wait for you to continue.a vietnam vet

Beautiful writing

Surprised at how good that felt, can (almost) feel her body against mine. Very glad that he maintains the fitness of his cock. It helps Love to conquer Fear.
But where would the story be without your imagination.

Great story

This is great. It's got some nicely thought out background, and some very hit sex. I'd love to read another chapter or three about Joe and his granddaughters.

Great

One of best stories,can you write part 2 or even more

rvn 1972 pliku

nice i was a crew chief centril highlands 1972

where is the next chapter

It was a wonderful story and I would love for you to continue with it. I know it's been a long time since you posted the story. I hope you will write some more or at least tie up the loose ends.

The wait continues...sighs :D

Part 2 yes please!

great story

I'm a Viet Nam vet and I loved this story. I NEED the next chapter NOW! PLEASE!

good story!

I enjoyed this tale and would like to read more. Pleased to see you use CUNT for the female genitals -- most of your compatriiots seem to avoid this word, using the childish PUSSY instead! Keep on writing, your output's always good Cheers, John.

just wild about asian woman...

Loved your story, can't wait to read what should follow...
Anyway, thank you for writing a good story.

great story

Great read I hope part two is just as good

anonymous #2

I can hardly wait for chapter 2 !!!!!

It's quite possible to happen

Also a Nam vet though Tonkin Gulf Yacht Club. One of the guys who worked for me found out he had a 13 year old daughter working a bar in the Philippines. This is a tale of lust, and love. There's nothing wrong with that.
Your stories are about people. Real people like the ones I know. You give me a very high standard to shoot for in my own writing.
Thanks

fantastic!!!

hope you get to write chapter 2 sometime soon . see you later. bob w.

Chapter #2?

I would like to read the next chapter.
Love your stories. I just hope you forgot to post the chapter since it was so long ago.
If not please consider doing it. Thanks anyway :)

chapter 2 cant wait

I cant wait for chapter two hope u post it soon

Chapter 2 Please

Not quite fully believable but continue.

Believable enough for me :). ...well except the part about all the girls he slept with over there being over eighteen, lol. Gotta meet the boards requirements though, lol.

I would LOVE to see a part two of this!! Its been a long time since Ive read this and havent seen it pop up so I hope you still have the rough draft handy! :)
...few enough asian stories on here. I dont know where I picked up my asian love and fetish, hell, Im still trying to figure out how in the hell I married a wide hipped pale white girl, lol.

A God amongst mere mortals....

First, let me bow to your greatness Sir. I can honestly say YOU are the great American hero; or at least mine! I couldn't help but hang on every word. I like how you gave some background info as that part of the story started to develop. It brings clarity to the bigger picture in my head & helps with character development & whatnot. I swear, this has got to be one of the best, if not the best, story I've ever read or heard of. If I was you, I'd go buy a fuckin lottery ticket cuz you're so goddamn lucky...goddamn rat-bastard, I'm jealous!

You can't leave me hanging like this, to hell with everyone else, if even only for me, you gotta finish it & damn, I hope it finishes the way I'm hoping...you, 8 titties & 4 dripping wet pussies begging for that angry inch!!

A tip of the hat to you Sir, for you are a God amongst mere mortals!

P.s: I live in Southern California, probably right by your ladies (if they're by little Saigon = garden grove/westminister)

Thanks

I read that story the second time.
don't remember the time when i discovered it first.
rated it like 5 (this time)
best ever!
you're a great author so i would like to complimet you more, but, as you have alredy guessed, I'm not english or american tongue, so i just copied the comment of someone annonymous that i want to add to my words

thanks annonymous and take my appology for copying without asking you first but i couldnot have formulated that any better:

A God amongst mere mortals....

First, let me bow to your greatness Sir. I can honestly say YOU are the great American hero; or at least mine! I couldn't help but hang on every word. I like how you gave some background info as that part of the story started to develop. It brings clarity to the bigger picture in my head & helps with character development & whatnot. I swear, this has got to be one of the best, if not the best, story I've ever read or heard of. If I was you, I'd go buy a fuckin lottery ticket cuz you're so goddamn lucky...goddamn rat-bastard, I'm jealous!

You can't leave me hanging like this, to hell with everyone else, if even only for me, you gotta finish it & damn, I hope it finishes the way I'm hoping...you, 8 titties & 4 dripping wet pussies begging for that angry inch!!

A tip of the hat to you Sir, for you are a God amongst mere mortals!

Unlikely, yet enjoyable

Aside from the incredible odds against an American soldier with two lost Vietnamese wives meeting and fucking one of his granddaughters in America, 40 years later, it's also improbable that: 1) the soldier would become a ranting anti-Vietnamese racist; 2) he would spy on all of his tenants for years with high-tech equipment and never be discovered by anyone; and 3) his Vietnamese-American granddaughter would want him to fuck her beloved sister as well as herself, and would not feel obliged to tell her sister who this man really was in their family's history before even introducing them to each other.

Nevertheless, you are quite a storyteller, and your skills enable us to overlook the improbabilities and enjoy "My Vietnamese Granddaughter" anyway. Thank you.

An Enjoyable Plausable Story

I have rated this story 5 stars; after I started I could not put it down. Very intrigued with the ins and outs of the relationships.
When can we have a part 2? The story needs a proper conclusion and the meeting of the protagonists. Plus, the drawing together of his US family.
Great Story Loved It
Chase

Excellent story kind of leaves you hanging though definitely needs a part 2

loved it I was in Vietnam 67- 68 I have loved Vietnamese women ever since just couldn't
find 1 to marry when I returned to the states.