very erotic hopefully there will be more it was so horny
Great start plaese continue
great start.. i hope you intend to continue the story
I loved it, I hope you continue with other parts to it.
please keep going very interesting start
I love the originality of the idea and the way you presented it. More please. Millie
Great start. This could be a great story!
When will you come up with the next part? Eagerly waiting for it .
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erotic
very erotic hopefully there will be more it was so horny
continue
Great start plaese continue
More
great start.. i hope you intend to continue the story
Really Good
I loved it, I hope you continue with other parts to it.
more
please keep going very interesting start
Great Start
I love the originality of the idea and the way you presented it. More please.
Millie
Yes Please
Great start. This could be a great story!
Is the next part coming up?
When will you come up with the next part? Eagerly waiting for it .
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More submissions by rkm10.