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Highland Magic Ch. 16

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by Stealthskajira02/02/07

some relatives you just want to...

strangle! Anywho, glad to see you back Luckie! Missed ya! Keep writing, you're great at it.

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by Anonymous11/29/09

Awesome!!

This is an amazing story!!! I absolutely love it, but you have a few grammer problems, you might want to check some of your word usage.

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by Anonymous08/28/11

Grammar

Brilliant story, really, but please please please learn when to put "your" and "you're". If I read that one more time I'll go mad!

Haha

Very enjoyable nonetheless.

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