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by vampiredust01/28/07

Excellent

Excellent imagery and metaphor. You've crafted this well enough to make me think about it time and time again. I like it when a poem does that.

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by LeBroz01/28/07

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Excellent sparse piece with vivid imagery as it sensuously rolls through the mind.

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by duddle14601/28/07

nice

Lovely little snippet describing a peaceful scene ~ growing grass. Pleasant.

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by Anonymous01/28/07

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A nice image but young grass is short tall grass is old.

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by Amyfriend01/29/07

Short, sweet....

and effective

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