All Comments on 'Envy'

Excellent imagery and metaphor. You've crafted this well enough to make me think about it time and time again. I like it when a poem does that.

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Excellent sparse piece with vivid imagery as it sensuously rolls through the mind.

Lovely little snippet describing a peaceful scene ~ growing grass. Pleasant.

A nice image but young grass is short tall grass is old.

and effective