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by Anonymous

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by vampiredust01/28/07

Tender

A tender, sweet piece. You've captured the beauty of something quite ordinary well. Well written and a joy to read.

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by duddle14601/28/07

associating

Chance meeting ~ a friendly converstion.

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by LeBroz01/28/07

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Enjoyed reading this a couple times. The image of inconsequential conversations being held while the whole world fades away until jarred back to the real, until an opportunity for another chat avails itself and then again, goodbye world...

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by normal jean01/30/07

the feel of this poem

was like a dance to me. I always enjoy your views on human nature. really good work

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by Amyfriend01/30/07

Communications...

in todays world..

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