All Comments on 'Giselle At The Gate Of Openings'

Welcome to the Poetry side of Lit with a long verse of raw, out-of-control Lust.

More of a rhymed (with more than few problems) story than a poem to me.

As a fantasy of zipless sex with anonymous numerous partners its ok, just not my cup of tea.

and a little too adult for rhyme. I thought it was pretty smooth for the most part. sandspike

Hot, hot, unadulterated sex....orgy style....ooooh yesss

be in the opera as a lead. TK U MLJ LV NV

any where it fits and is comfortable. TK U MLJ LV NV

never penetrate a leaky orifice. TK U MLJ LV NV

Where, exactly, is she now? :+))

is even more exquisite in reality