It has a fast pace and a very original or fresh storyline. I think that the actual sex could have been written with more tension and detail but overall I liked it. Will definitely check out the sequel...
Keep the story coming (which will keep me cumming)
Great work, keep it up. Very original concept of the tormented girlfriend and the guy who enjoys her strapon so much, she is almost jealous of it. Look forward to reading future installments of this great tale.
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Anonymous02/04/07
Beautiful
I really felt for the characters in that. Impressive.
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Anonymous02/05/07
Bullshit
There is nothing better than having shit on your dick. For queers that is.
English
Very original!
It has a fast pace and a very original or fresh storyline. I think that the actual sex could have been written with more tension and detail but overall I liked it. Will definitely check out the sequel...
Keep the story coming (which will keep me cumming)
Great work, keep it up. Very original concept of the tormented girlfriend and the guy who enjoys her strapon so much, she is almost jealous of it. Look forward to reading future installments of this great tale.
Beautiful
I really felt for the characters in that. Impressive.
Bullshit
There is nothing better than having shit on your dick. For queers that is.
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