At first I thought that I must be demented for wanting to see my wife in a MMF situation, but I found out much later in life that it is not so unusual at all. I now love stories like this one, but more so if written by a woman from a woman's viewpoint. Please write more!!!!
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Anonymous02/09/12
Nice
A very good story, well told and believeable. Obviously written by a woman - sharing all the internal feelings of the female. A little much for us men but nevertheless, well done. Thank you.
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Anonymous12/16/12
violated
nick is a creep - the woman who loves him was used and violated in a cheap selfish way. a better ending would have been for her to leave, refusing to submit to his bullshit. 63EE
Very well written story. Personally I hope Vina wakes up and kicks Nick's controlling ass to the curb.
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Anonymous06/27/13
sleaze time
get outta there, babe. no love in that act!
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Anonymous02/13/16
To pitiful
I get what you were trying to do, but her feeling so... Afraid. Of just having sex. Its not like this big horrible thing. At first understandable but after it started it would gave been nice for her to get into it. The whole second guessing her husband's love and all cause he came on her dude whatever get put lol. That's not just a joke its pathetic..
I've never know a girl get that sentimental over it. Good story but needs less freaking out on the girls part.
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Anonymous02/07/17
amazing!
I find the comments as interesting as the story. Some want enemies wanting to create a bad man in Nick; others want to focus on her 'violation' and the implication of rape, even as she struggled to accept what was happening; others want her to truly embrace it all and be 'changed' by the events. But the author wants us to see things differently...A horny man wanting his wife to do this 'deed' on Valentine's Day, a wife who really does want to please her hubby..... a woman who feels all the emotions of sex and yet........ Lots of great lines in this story, one paragraph rang powerfully to me.
"She looked at her husband. His excitement was evident on his face. His eyes held a passion and intensity that she had never seen before. It was alien, this expression. At that moment, she felt like Nick was not her husband, but a stranger. But no, that was crazy. As her eyes roved over his familiar features, she forced herself to remember the reason why she was doing this. She loved Nick and it was for his enjoyment that she was giving him what he wanted the most as a gift on Valentine's Day. She wanted to see him enjoy this fantasy."
The only thing I didn't like was the ending where the author 'makes' Nick a bad guy by coming on her face......yes, it tells us Nick is the bad guy but the ambivalence of the situation would have been better if he hadn't come and instead at the end, Nick's hand would be on his mouth and he has tears running down his cheek realizing that nothing will be the same.......
Great writing. Sorry I'm just seeing this story a decade after it was written. GREAT WRITING
English
more of this
this story needs a sequel!! plz don't stop here!
Wonderful!
At first I thought that I must be demented for wanting to see my wife in a MMF situation, but I found out much later in life that it is not so unusual at all. I now love stories like this one, but more so if written by a woman from a woman's viewpoint. Please write more!!!!
Nice
A very good story, well told and believeable. Obviously written by a woman - sharing all the internal feelings of the female. A little much for us men but nevertheless, well done. Thank you.
violated
nick is a creep - the woman who loves him was used and violated in a cheap selfish way. a better ending would have been for her to leave, refusing to submit to his bullshit. 63EE
she needs to divorce that creep
Very well written story. Personally I hope Vina wakes up and kicks Nick's controlling ass to the curb.
sleaze time
get outta there, babe. no love in that act!
To pitiful
I get what you were trying to do, but her feeling so... Afraid. Of just having sex. Its not like this big horrible thing. At first understandable but after it started it would gave been nice for her to get into it. The whole second guessing her husband's love and all cause he came on her dude whatever get put lol. That's not just a joke its pathetic..
I've never know a girl get that sentimental over it. Good story but needs less freaking out on the girls part.
amazing!
I find the comments as interesting as the story. Some want enemies wanting to create a bad man in Nick; others want to focus on her 'violation' and the implication of rape, even as she struggled to accept what was happening; others want her to truly embrace it all and be 'changed' by the events. But the author wants us to see things differently...A horny man wanting his wife to do this 'deed' on Valentine's Day, a wife who really does want to please her hubby..... a woman who feels all the emotions of sex and yet........ Lots of great lines in this story, one paragraph rang powerfully to me.
"She looked at her husband. His excitement was evident on his face. His eyes held a passion and intensity that she had never seen before. It was alien, this expression. At that moment, she felt like Nick was not her husband, but a stranger. But no, that was crazy. As her eyes roved over his familiar features, she forced herself to remember the reason why she was doing this. She loved Nick and it was for his enjoyment that she was giving him what he wanted the most as a gift on Valentine's Day. She wanted to see him enjoy this fantasy."
The only thing I didn't like was the ending where the author 'makes' Nick a bad guy by coming on her face......yes, it tells us Nick is the bad guy but the ambivalence of the situation would have been better if he hadn't come and instead at the end, Nick's hand would be on his mouth and he has tears running down his cheek realizing that nothing will be the same.......
Great writing. Sorry I'm just seeing this story a decade after it was written. GREAT WRITING
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