I wish you'd tell me when your stories are up. I happened on this little gem quite by accident. This one is ANYTHING but a boring day at the office. Another one well done, Magica
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Anonymous02/04/07
Erection Perfection!
Oh I can't wait to read more just like this one! Hope many more chapters of torment are to cum our way! I will be UP and waiting for allot more punishment just like this one!
English
Great story! Erotic and well told!
This is an excellent story! I really enjoyed it! Extremly well writen!
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I wish you'd tell me when your stories are up. I happened on this little gem quite by accident. This one is ANYTHING but a boring day at the office. Another one well done, Magica
Erection Perfection!
Oh I can't wait to read more just like this one! Hope many more chapters of torment are to cum our way! I will be UP and waiting for allot more punishment just like this one!
Incredible!
Amazingly hot and erotic...a great read and one I could cum back to time and time again...
Good Start!
A nice fantasy, not so much a story as a stream of consciousness. I think this particular stream could do with it’s banks stabilising in parts.
A good editor should be able to help you smooth things out a bit. You could work on your descriptions away from the sex scenes too.
Holy Shit!
Girl that was an amazing story. I can not read of your next ones.
Thump
Holy Shit!
Sorry that was suppose to be that I can not wait to read your next ones.
Thump
Holy Shit!
With this kind of great stuff how come you only have four stories. You tease!
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This was one hot story and I hope you'll continue it.
Awesome
I loved this story. I hope that you'll write some more parts to it. I'd love to see what happens next.
Loved the teasing.
A new, erotic twist on office dalliance.
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