All Comments on 'Anal At Last Ch. 01'

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Anonymousabout 17 years ago

Excuse me?

This story was all about how he got to RUB the OUTSIDE of her asshole very briefly? That's it? You gotta be kidding me!

scottishmeat about 17 years agoAuthor

It's chapter 1... wait and see.

There's more coming.

pjwolf about 17 years ago

A Great Beginning

Obviously, some people just want to read stories that give immediate and instant gratification...Good erotic writing is like anything truly erotic - the build-up and anticipation heighten the senses and increase the enjoyment. Just, do not let us wait tooooo long for Chapter 2

katherinem2000 almost 17 years ago

mmmmmmmmmmmm

I love Scottish Meat :) heading off to read chapter 2 . . .

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