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by Anonymous

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by duddle14602/01/07

desire

Please don't let me love and want you ~ quite this much.

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by Amyfriend02/01/07

Oh...

Even my skin prickles, tingles and glows after reading your beautiful poem.

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by LeBroz02/01/07

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You show a certain maturation here compared to your earlier work. Many who write at Lit do so for a brief period and show no change or growth in their style; you've shown both here and I look forward to seeing continued growth in your skills as a poet.

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