Goin' Fishin'

Thanks for a fun read. Wish that it was longer.

Good story very well written

Thanks that was a real good read!

What an amazing story. Thank you!!

Very nice

That was a most enjoyable story. My only problem was that it ended to soon. Bummer. But thank you for a great read. A 5. Jim ps. its also nice to have none of those anons from LW commenting.

pheww....

i amm fannning myself...shit...
Every once in a while you come across stories which play out in your head like a movie (a comedy here no doubt..)
I am so so awed by ur writing style..but i still felt like you forgot to post another page of it..
anyway,thank you so much for sharing such an amazing piece of work..we all get to read it free of cost..i'm a big fan..

Just finished it for the 4th time ...

cried like always!

Jim

fking awesome story cant stop laughing at heather XD!!!

A very fine story!

I am in awe of the quality of this story, truly amazing! I shall be looking for more of your work. R.T.

:)

AWESOME!!!

loved it !

one of the best ever! This author should go professional.

Just too, too, too good for words -

Argh nicely done -

Perfect

Great in every respect. Very enjoyable.

werez da feesh

Very Well Done

Pasted a smile on my face

That alone is worth 5* but the fact that the story is beautiful simply blew it past any amount of stars I could award. Thank you for sharing this with us.

How sweet

This made me laugh out loud. Thank you for such a sweet story.

lovely story

I am a sucker for lovely stories like this.

Freaking cute

But I don't understand why Marcia stopped Will from asking Jenny out for prom in their junior years?

ending

The ending may be fairly obvious, but a couple more paragraphs ending the story would have been nice.

Awesome

That was great; i couldn't stop smiling from beginning to end

GONE FISHING

theres a sign on your door, TK U MLJ LV NV

love your other stories too, love your sense of humour, but this one is my fav

Damn Fine Story

will read the others too.

Very nice

Well developed characters, cute plot, but bad sex. No one likes bad sex. :( humorous and entertaining though

Bad sex?

NO! This was not a sex story. It was a love story, and I love it! Well done.

Jerry

just perfect

why is there no 6. star to give?

Women like Jenny are few and far between.

Which makes those of us with them in our lives blessed and grateful. The story was written quite well. A little twist in a story always seems sto enhance it and this one is evidence of that.
Thank you

In gratitude

I am old enough and experienced enough to know good literature when I read it. Though I don't normally choose to read many from the "Romance" genre, but in this case, I'm certainly glad that I did.

This is one of the best crafted and best told stories I have read in years. I, too, wish there were a rating high enough to accurately portray my appreciation.
Thank you

again, another wonderfully written love story...by the way, hope elizabeth's story is in the works?

once again

well once again i have read this wonderful story. guess i keep comming back to it because it makes me feel good. once again loved it

Speechless.

Awesome just awesome.

Nice!

Really good story. Great job. Give us plenty more.

Very Entertaining Story*****

Thanks for sharing this great piece of writing.

loved it...

I thought your characters were great, and your ability to keep the story interesting was superb. I will be reading more of your work.

Okay, that was hilarious!
I was laughing almost all the way through it, and it left me with a wonderful glow.
Perfect!

Loved it!

Very well written and heartwarming.

My kinda fishing!

Great job! It was exciting from begining to end.

Nice

OK - good story - now do it again !

well that sucked. you can't just up and end a story like that.

Wow! 5*

I just read a heart-warming romance! And feel better, as a result!

Thank you. (Now I'll go see what other stories you have...)

anon doesn't know a good story when he reads one.

What did you need? And they all lived happily ever after except Heather? Good story. Well written

Sequels

This seems to be only the first act of a three act play, the second in which Heather tries to break them up, and the third in which Bill and Jenny reconcile and marry...

Damn Fine

Read it again ;-)
Great tale!!

Thx!!

I've just read it AGAIN

One of the all-time great feel-good stories on Literotica. Not too long, not too rushed, and covers all the essential elements of a romance. What more could you ask for? It's just a shame that you can't vote each time you read it! :-)

Where is MarshAlien?

Just reread the story. Since the last time MarshAlien submitted to this group was in 2008, I wonder if something happened to him. Out of all the authors I have read he is my favorite. In fact to get his "living dolls" story back, I paid for the kindle version.
If anyone knows what happened to him I would appreciate knowing also.

Just like everyone else...

I've now read this story three or four times, and think that it's one of the best short stories I've ever read anywhere. I, too, would love to know what happened to MarshAlien - whatever the answer, his literary legacy will live on (although it would be a shame if it were only on Literotica).

Very nice

A heart warming tale with a few little twists. Well done.

lovely story

What a lovely heartwarming story

I"ve read this about four times and I enjoy it more each time I read it.

Inspired, I am

This story warms my heart. I have visited this story so many times - just to get over things.

It helps me- thank you for writing this.

Ever honored and obliged - thank you !

Outstanding

I loved this.... great to see a bit of humor mixed in with a gold digging vixen's comeuppance. I hope you'll add a few more chapters.