Goin' Fishin'

AWESOME! The Middle of the Road Kid Wins!

Diligence pays plus a little luck probably. Plus it really looks like he gets his true love right on top of it all. A very good writing effort to read and the slutty, bitch sister loses.

Please

more! this was great but a sequel or a series would be awesome. Your writing is so fluid. great job

loved it...

and I gave it a 5 but the story ends too quickly. It really needs a complete ending.

PLEASE FINISH IT!!!!!

I absolutely LOVE this story. I've read and re-read it many times. I's possibly my favorite story that I've read on this site. Sore some reason, it touches me on a gut level. That being said, it does end precipitously. It just stops with none of the story tension points resolved. What was the interaction after the proposal? How did Heather react? Ms. Colley? Friends? The rest of the crowd? I would LOVE IT if you could tie it up. It NEEDS it. It's still a great story though but slightly unfinished. PLEASE FINISH IT even if it's only half a page or so!!!!!!

Awesome...

Even without sex this would be a great story... I can really picture watching this story as a movie... and not meaning a porn...

Loved it...

I Agree

Very very good. Please expand and add more to the end. I really liked this one.

Absolutely delectable

I can't stop smiling, as already pointed out, should be a movie ... DKP

A nice story

The story line was pretty obvious, but it was a great "feel good" tale. Thanks.

Excellent

What a great tale. Life should be this good.

thanks for sharing

This was well written and well told thanks for sharing

finally

a story worthy of reading.
too many jpb radk hdk and other bad to ok stories on here.

agree

better than the ttt, radk ,hdk, jpb and rest with there hooker and slut stories

pretty shallow waters for fishing!

OK... but awful shallow read.

like the story

wanted to rate 4*s, but with the over inflated ratings given for 90% of the stories not as good as this,,,, had to rate 5*****s

Too Short

The way it is written it shouldn't be a 5*. At 4 or 5 pages it would certainly be. Still 5*

Nice Story...

I really liked this story, but I feel that it ended too abruptly. Just felt like it should have had more of an ending...Overall, I enjoyed the characters and story. Keep up the good work.

Classic!

Whenever I want an emotional pickup, I come back to this tale.
My all time favorite to date.

Nicely done.
Thx!

I Really...

...like this story. I've read this over a dozen time and still get a kick out of it.

5 Stars

Fun

This is a fun story. Thanks for sharing.

Outstanding

When you've read something by Marsh Alien, you've read the best, and this is one of his best.

the title

Why you named it go fishing?

Great story

Brilliantly told. Loved it.

I like a brilliantly told story...

...and this is definately one of my liking. The only problem I have: I find it a bit hard to believe that someone can change within 10 years in a way that even neighbours and friends do not recognize him.
Nevertheless: 5* for an enjoyable story.

I love this story!

I've probably read it a dozen times or more over the last few years. Any time I need a quick pick-me-up, this always does the job.

Now if I could just remember my damned password so I don't have to keep commenting as A. Nony...

VisualPerv

Wonderful tale!

Every so often I come back and read this again...it is just that good. Wish it was two paragraphs longer though.

love it

maybe just one more chapter though? And to the question about why the title - because of the card game - got any jacks? Go fish. Makes sense to me :)

Nice

One of those tales you read over and over to make you feel good about life.

More! More! More

Please, One more chapter! Please?

MOTHERS USUALLY KNOW BEST

even if its not your own Mother, TK U MLJ LV NV

a very tender story

but,
it all happened so fast. 3 days from hello my name is Bill to will you marry me.
another chapter, another page, or even another paragraph would have been nice.

Great

Not 3 days. He has been in love with her for years!!

3 days? 13 years no?

I'm not sure if that comment about knowing her only 3 days was sincere or just sarcasm but I'm pretty sure he said he'd been in love with her for 13 years.

To 3 days ? 13 years :

Please don't read nice stories like this when you're drunk ; You'll retain more of the story if you're sober !

Great story MA - Throwing the ring was a nice touch! ;)

3 Days

I like that. I actually know a couple that has been married for 23 years now after only knowing each other for one day. It's possible! Sometimes, you just know. I wanted to know what happens with them all next though...

Amazing Love Story

I love this story and have probably read it 7-8 times. Keep writing stories like this.

I met my wife at a dance party 50 years ago and again the next week where it was love at second sight if not the first sight. Because we were young and she had one more year of high school, we dated and married 5 years later. My youngest son met his wife 2 years ago and it was the same. When many of my friends talk of meeting the love of their life, it was similar. Maybe a few grew up togehter in High School or College, but for many of us it was a chance meeting and the chemistry was right.

As The Man before Me Said...

This is a wonderful love story. The is the second time is six months that I've read it and must say it wears very well. The authors voice is so crisp and alive I can only as one thing of him by way of improvement. You need to write this book. The one that leads up to this ending. Thanks for you wonderful, wonderful works....

Fabulous story!

Very written, snappy dialogue and wonderful characters. I liked Marcia the best! Thanks for a great read!

Fantastic Story.

Six Stars!

5 Stars are not enough...

......I´ve read over 5000 average stories, many good stories, and some are extraordinary...this one surely belongs to my top 4. Thank you for writing it.

what? where's the three part; where does this begin? where does it end? where is the conflict, and where's the resolution?

Why!

Why do the real good stories always seem too short? You have some real good characters here and you have real True Love, too boot. Thank You for a very enjoyable story.

true love

Great story. We need a sequel there has to be about two more chapters to this story. Please write a sequel. It is such a fun story.


Ro . Texa . cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

WHAT...SHIT

WTF It can't end there...I could not stop reading this story...it has got to have more...lots more. Dam it was good and very well written. But, PLEASE, PLEASE, don't make an old 65 year old man beg...Very, Very well done.

Jim WV.

I to was taken aback at its ending.Such a warm a exciting story,surely there is more...please ?

Really liked the story but hated the ending, needs a sequel.

More...

Please.

Bravo ! Encore !!

I'm not the only one who is begging for an epilogue. Very well done. Good story. A nice fairy tale deserves to let us know about how they 'lived happily ever after.' Please do not disappoint !!??

Brilliant

Brilliant

Miserable Wretch

It's only half a story. You should have written more. Therefore only 5*