All Comments on 'Use Your Lips To Mark Me A Canvas'

Quite an imaginative prose poem. I loved the imagery and lines like 'Nip the mountains into hills, lick the valleys into seas'

Fab stuff, mentioned in today's new poem reviews

"Blowing tsunamis of smoke rings, hissing animals come out between your teeth."..Awesome stuff.

This poem is filled with wonderful visual images and builds to completion.

Welcome to Lit with this creative prose poem; why stop at a world, go for a universe. That sort of creativity knows no bounds.