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Thank You
Enjoyable story. Simple. and the guy picked up on the signs.
That story despressed the he'll out of me
You constructed a no win situation and just fed it more and more pain. Thanks for not giving them any way out. Also thanks for the crappy depressed feeling you gave me too.
I think I'll skip you other stories. Your not a bad writer, but frankly real life is hard enough without wallow fiction adding to it.
A very good story;
My only oposition to this one is the time it took to do something about the problem. This exposed the husband to VD and a lot more humiliation. However he grew a solid set of balls and took the necesary action. The story was a dark story with a depresing ending,, which I was expecting when I started reading it and I was able to enjoy it to the end. R.T.
secret cuck fetish?
Why continue to fuck a stupid whore (one who copulates with strangers w/o protection) when it risks not only your health but the health of the children?
I liked this one better.
You have a problem with paragraph length. For example:
***
For the most part, Ann was easy to get along with, as long as she got her way. I wasn't a pushover, but I learned pretty quickly that the best way to keep the peace in our house was to let Ann at least think she was getting her way.
Because when she didn't, she could be a bitch, and she wasn't above using sex as a weapon. It was a formidable tool in her emotional arsenal, because Ann was a walking wet dream, especially when she really worked at looking good, which was most of the time.
***
This is actually one paragraph IMO. If it is two, the first sentence of the second paragraph belongs on the prior paragraph. My opinion. I also wouldn't start a sentence with 'because' as normally because it indicates that what you are saying is actually a phrase that belongs tacked onto the prior sentence.
Quibble 2: Bugging the room. Most hotels don't rent out the same room. It should have been established that it was a regular rental by Spaulding primarily for it's privacy.
What I liked: That the man didn't moon forever over his lost wife. It begs credibility that most of these sort of stories have one or both partners pining forever for that one love. No. You can and do find other people. Sad but true.
Old folks are not sexy
so I stopped reading and gave it 1*
Why wait?
I always wonder when I read a story like this, why did the husband wait to find out what was off with his wife. HE had as much to do with the marriage failure as she did. She was being blackmailed. He was being a wimpy asshole.
#2 THE LACK OF SOMETHING ALSO CHANGES THE MOTIVES
depending on if they were severe enough to be considered. TK U MLJ LV NV
wow size14shoe
14 must be your IQ, she was a slut plain and simple. so because so slut decides to cheat, you call the husband the asshole. She was a cheating whore and he dumped her, not unlike the person that dumped you on your head.
No Whore
She was addicted to cocaine and with a little nudge (horny - drugs) she succumbed to the blackmail and then it got easy. For drug users, especially coke - sex is great and an exciting part of it.
Why was she not a whore - becasue - she was straight, loyal and happy when she didn't use it - for years!
Actually, with her libido, she could turn out to be a 'Hotwife, of course, with the right husband.
Anyway, so she liked sex - a lot, the author didn't take us that far down the road to see if she started random fucking and then - she is single now so - how would we ever know.
I respect our hero and his conviction but can't understand, for an educated man and father, why he screwed around and let things really get out of hand instead of jumping in earlier and taking some action that may have resolved everything. Well, it's a story!
Thanks Jack.
listen to huecuck if
you want the down-low on what it means to be a cuck; he is an admitted cuck and knows first hand everything there is to know about living as a cuck, cuckhood, cuckoldry and cuckdom.
no his loss
And the children's loss. She's free wealthy young and attractive. I'd call that a win for her.
Forgive does not mean reconcile
I actually liked the story. It was an interesting plot and I actually liked the husband. I also liked the fact that he actually FORGAVE her. Forgive does not mean reconcile. It means that you release that person of what they did to you. By doing that you release the hold that the person has over you. As long as you are angry with that person, they will always have a hold on you. If you are having a great day, and you see your ex, or your children tell you a story about your ex, and you are suddenly angry, then your ex has power over you. They didn't even have to do or say anything to you to ruin your day. That is what you release yourself from when you decide to forgive and let go. That is what the protagonist did in this story. In the end, he has a better relationship with his kids. That is a happy ending
#3 SMOKE AND MIRRORS CAN ONLY FUNCTION
if its not a 2way mirror and there is no wind, TK U MLJ LV NV
Worthless
She could have been outed to everyone and the Courts still would have given her custody and the house until the kids graduated High School. Because that's the way we roll in this country. This story was delusional.
It may be delusional.
But it's makes more sence then the way you're fucked up country rolls.
Not a factual statement..
Women do not always get custody. In the majority of cases yes, but certainly not always. That being said she gave up custody in this story, again rare but it does happen.
one glaring inconsistency
The reason for the quick signature on the divorce was to prevent the details from becoming public. Yet, she took her boss to court, during which the details would have all come out.
As you so eloquently said, oh well.
She would have gotten a GOOD lawyer with the kids at stake
And he would have gotten a restraining order for all the illegally obtained tapes. And then he would have opened up the can of Whoop Ass on her Boss and made him the bad guy. In the divorce hubby would have MAYBE gotten Joint custody, but she would have stayed in the house with him paying alimony and child support. I like your ending but it was simply too unbelievable. He lost.
trial
the tapes and evidence could easily have been challenged in court probably resulting with her retaining at least joint guardianship. The smoke and mirrors was the author's, not hers
The last two commentors are so full of shit...
that they stink even on a laptop screen.
She Paid a Price
She gave up custody to prevent the incriminating evidence being used against her then used it against her asshole boss while she was the victim rather than the whore she would have looked like if hubby leaked it. Besides, its fiction. its not real.
SMOKE ON THE MIRRORS
is only good for decoration. TK U MLJ LV NV
Huh!!!
The underlying premise in the story is that she was in rehab in her past. If this wife actually loved her husband and family, why didn't she tell her boss to let everyone know that she was in rehab and to shove the job up his ass. It was a real weak idea for blackmail. She was in rehab years ago, so what. She has been off drugs for some years. She spread her legs and became a whore too easily.
THE WORST PART OF BLACKMAIL AND BRAINWASHING
it makes the subject think what could be. TK U MLJ LV NV
were is the revenge
were is the revenge on the asshole spradling you let him get away not doing anything to him when you knew he forced her into doing this
Generic
Too generic,woman cheats they divorce pretty much tells the whole story
no resolution. no emotion.
and what of Spaulding?
yawn
What a total crock of horse manure.
So after being afraid that her husband will smear her name (he's actually blackmailing her) she sues Spradling and the Company bringing everything out into the open? That made no sense. And it wouldn't have mattered anyway. Any Court in the land gives her custody, use of the family home until the kids graduate, big alimony and child support (remember she doesn't have a job) and a big part of his retirement. I don't recall anything about a pre-nup so she would have gotten a share of the hardware store or used that as leverage to get and even bigger split of their marital assets. While this might have been a nice little fantasy, the reality was he got to see his kids every other weekend, 2 weeks in the summer and maybe on a few holidays or their birthdays - if she didn't really stick it to him. And she had him by the balls. This story was totally unbelievable and implausible. Couldn't enjoy it knowing it was just so far out there and wrong. No stars.
Ended with a whimper
The story started off well but you seemed to lose intrest after the first hotel spying.
The energy went out of it.
"What a total crock of horse manure."
Exactly.
Closet-cuck-bait, for the virgin neckbeards soaking in the misogyny of their parent's basements.
Confession
She aggrandized her sexual encounters. Any sane woman who loved her husband and kids the way she professed to love them, would not have said what she said. Also, I don't see any woman, no matter how compromised she was, doing what she did. The plot makes for a good story but it ain't real life. Formulaic all the way.
Helena Montana serial cheater
TRUE STORY
Details about serial cheating wife on her 3rd husband available on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com
Former college instructor lost her job because of that info
Husband stayed with her. Not sure why. Do know he is a panty sniffer and for almost a year she made sure her panties were filled with two loads of one of her students seed. He would watch her bathe in prep for his Friday night bj with her panties pressed to his face. She expressed her delight in that fact in emails and IMs to her lover
Crappy
U could have done a lot better than tie crap. And to tru storey bullshit. Y don't u take a smart pill and quit writing
anon-crappy
Anyone who spells TRUE STORY AS YOU DO tru storey is the one who needs a smart pill
I have researched the facts and someone is just giving karma an assist
Not a good ending
I like the way you write and have just about read all of the loving wives you written.
This one had a bad progession of things that is not very believable if he suspects something is going on. She was being blackmailed into doing what she did. Makes a big difference if he loved his wife like he professed. A reasonable person would have made her sit down and told her how the cow ate cabbage and what would happen if she didn'f tell him everything. Not pussy foot around saying I don't know what to do. He is just as guilty as she. This should have ended with after a period of time and counseling they would try to get past it. If they didn't so be it. Mainly because of the blackmail and the children. I think this deserves another and more appropriate ending. The stories don't have to end in divorce.
Ending Was A Little Lacking
Why do people, especially women, fear the blackmail more than going to their husbands and together fight the scumbag behind the blackmail? To put the blackmailer ahead of her husband, children and marriage signals her willingness to forfeit them. Your ending needs some improvement.
To "the ending was a little lacking "
That's an interesting question. I don't think in real life a woman who really loves her husband and family would submit to blackmail. But I can say that I have experience with an ex who kept secret some things because she thought it would change how I felt about her. Ultimately it was her trying to hide who she was and how I found out what she was hiding from me that split us up. I honestly don't know if, had she just been upfront with me in the beginning, it would have worked out and we would be together. But the lack of faith to tell the truth is what ended it. I'm curious about what the women readers hear think.
Bullshit story
The whimp husband did nothing to the blackmailing Spradling! A real man would have beat the shit out of Spradling and his friends with a good alibi.
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