All Comments on 'Dancing with the Dark'

and so it begins, never to end, darkness consuming what light can send...

Excellent Red, simply excellent

metaphor. Good imagery and rhythm, too. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews

of two great forces.. Well done, very interesting.

I enjoyed your poem today!

Lovely and enchanting - delightfully seductive.

Permit me to congratulate you on the extent to which your poetry writing has matured. I remember when you first started posting your poems and how they'd need some tweaking; mostly to fix either some element of rhythm or rhyme. Now look at you ~ experimenting with different ways of expressing yourself, you've truly grown your wings and have learned to fly. Keep 'em coming.