I admit that is more in response to the annoymous feedback, more so than to the story itself, but as the creator of fiction, hindsight often comes into play and yuou wish you took your story in a different angle. It's rare that you can go back and fix it without ruining the integrity of the overall tale, but I think Rckplsky does it seamlessly.
Hollywood incorporates prequels all the time, I see no reason why you can't do the same in Literotica stories, even if it falls between chapters.
Keep up the great work Rckplsky!
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WHY 1.5
Why is this 1.5 is this supposed to go before Ch 2
And this sounds like it's going to go to the usual cockoldong and gay sex. If so good bye.
I wish some one would just write a HAPPY kinky couple story with the male abuse and mean and cruel endings.
Why NOT 1.5?
I admit that is more in response to the annoymous feedback, more so than to the story itself, but as the creator of fiction, hindsight often comes into play and yuou wish you took your story in a different angle. It's rare that you can go back and fix it without ruining the integrity of the overall tale, but I think Rckplsky does it seamlessly.
Hollywood incorporates prequels all the time, I see no reason why you can't do the same in Literotica stories, even if it falls between chapters.
Keep up the great work Rckplsky!
Just because...
I rated it a "1" just because of the racial slur.
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