All Comments on 'Beautiful Nightmare'

by Ladytiger199

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Ok, here is my thoughts...

Wow. Wow. Oh my God, wow.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Nice

Good story - maybe check your editing on your next submission but the story itself was hot - Well done

Mirriam - UK

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Well..............

good but you have to GRAMMER CHECK IT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
too many errors.

You need to learn the difference between she and her, was and were, there and their. Your grammar was so terrible that I couldn't enjoy yours story. Also I can't see anything nightmarish about this story.

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