All Comments on 'Late One Spring Night'

I just wish I had a sister to show me how hot that was!!!

Sure hope there'll be a second instalment!

Great story, I also hope you have more to go with this story. Heck, you still have Mom amd Dad to be seduced yet..

story went no where, short and dull

...with an H tag? Boring.

This is my idea of a perfect story. Obviously, most of the stories written on here are from the male perspective, so there's a lot of talk about how big a penis is, or how tight a pussy. It gets a little boring, and quite cheesy.

This story, however, felt like it was written for a woman to enjoy. For a start, it included foreplay, and got me hot from the beginning, building up slowly. Most women can't get turned on simply by reading about a guy pumping into a girl, we need something more.

Keep it going :)

Callie x

Very well written. I thought the pacing of the story was great and would love to read another installment.

I love it when taboos are violated!! Nice, slow buildup. Good job.

The pacing is good, and the sexual details are hotly accurate. The pacing bogs down a little in tiny details, phrases like 'I shook my head yes,' details that make me feel the writer is trying to tell a story instead of SHOW a story. When the writer moved into the actual mound grinding it charges ahead again and leaves the reader wanting more. Good job, keep writing!

Lesbian incest is fast becoming my favorite story line and this was quite good.

Great start to what sounds like a very intense first time orgasm. . . . I am sure sis wanted to do lots more with you too. . . . So if you don't mind, go ahead and tell us some more.

BTW, I found your page here from flickr, and would really enjoy hearing more about you and sister, incest is so taboo, but also so HOT, in my mind anyways!

Sure hope you consider it and are still writing. . .

Larry x

Great writing, Rachel!

It would be great if your sister would "help" me that way!

Or better still if you would!

Pamela

Just reading this has made me so very horny. Great writing Rachel.